you with the gift of graitude and skill`s."      Her word`s touched Moona and she rose up proudly.   Her gaze went to Padded Paw. She smiled and Maka spoke once again. '' I give a B to Padded Paw for not winning me over in battle, but also haveing a good addutuide. And I give you the honor of giveing and nice." 

  

 

          She gave her words about Jet and then steped off. " Thank you." She said and nodded her head down. Amaya stepped back up.   " Now that it is over I would like you to go back to your den`s, I have a supprise for all of you in the morning."   Moona looked over at Amaya and she said. " Go to him." Moona smiled and searched the dieing crowd to find Black Paw.   She found him sitting on a hill gazeing silently at the moon. Moona got closer and sat next to him. He looked at Moona and smiled. " Hi Moona." Moona touched noses to him in greeting.     He smiled again. A urge was inside her as she tried not to lick him, as she wanted to. Instead she gently wraped her tail around him. He looked down and saw that there tail`s were interlocked.   She let out a sigh and leaned her head on is shoulder. They both shown on the hill as the cresent moon hovered above them.   Then the urge kicked in again and she found her self gingerly licking between his ears. He hummed deeply in his throat then snuggled into her. They sat like that for a while, gazeing off in the landscape.   Finally, Moona said. " I guess I have to go now." She licked him once more on the cheek then she ran off to her den.  Blackpaw`s gentle gaze drifting with her.                Chapter Four:  Ferice Word`s         She awoke in her bed faaceing towrds the sun. She got up and went over to the dead kill pile. Surely someone would have went in the forest and gotten something? There was nothing there.       Her stomach rumbled and she looked around. She then raced into the wood`s, her stomch empty.   She raced threw the wood`s and the Scysco smell filled her nose.  She raced towrd`s it and then came to the hill. She looked down. The pack was once again busy. Without thinking she raced down the hill and tumbled into the camp.  She hit the ground and fumbled for her paws. All the wolves stoped. They were stareing at her, teth bared.   A low growl filled the silince and a white wolf jumped into the scence. Bayro! " How dare you come in my ground!" He spat. " If you wont leave i`ll rip you to shreds." Moona rolled her eye`s. " Your to weak to even pick up a newborn pup!" Moona remarked standing up and puffing out her fur.   He curled up his lip. He flashed his eyes to his pack, and they made a circle around Moona. " Get ready to die." Bayro said harshly and in a blink he was ontop of her.    Pain swelled inside her and she shreiked and doubled over, landing on her back then throwing him of. He landed with a thunk then charged again.  She was ready and sunk her fangs into his neck. He gritted his teeth and sunk to the ground. " Go.." He said. " GO!" Moona  heasited and gave him one last bite on the tail.He crinkeld his nose then said," This will change for your whole pack young one!" She ran away. With the most stupid thought in her mind.  'Why did I do that?'

 

 

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  She almost bumped into  Amaya and Samo as she eneterd the camp. Amaya sniffed Moona. " Yo`ve been in the Scyco grounds! And have had a battle with Bayro!" She howled to the pack. " Pack meeting. NOW!"          Moona slumped down and followd her to Howling rock. " I have to say something." Amaya said. " Moona has gone into Scyco grounds. And have had a battle with Bayro. She shall not be punished. Because she is a army wolf and I cannot change what she did in anyway. Though, she will have to hunt for the pack for the next week, for a small punishment for her. Also, tonight is howling night.  " As you know, we will meet at the howling rock at 6:00. You are all dismessed." She left and the others left to. Moona sighed, realived.   She went over to Black Paws den and said. " Hey,can I talk with you for a minute?" He smiled and got up. They both went over near the lake, with a log stradeling itself ontop. She turned to face him and said. " When I was fighting with Bayro he said  'Things will change for the whole pack.'  He cocked his head. " Tell that to Amaya at the howling. Maybaye its a big deal. He did say it harshly right?" Moona nodded. " Ok, tell her then." He jumped up on the log. " Thanks." Moona said, and toutched noses to him. " Also," HHe aid, laying down. " Tell her that your the prettyist wolf in the world." Moona smiled and skirted away.  Ocansinly looking back at the smileing Black Paw.                           ******   The sky was pitch dark. A chilly wind lapped at the wolves comeing out of there dens and to the gathering feild. Amaya was on her rock, gazeing at the wolves below her. " Now, that all of you have come, we shall make the journy to the Sarman rock. "    The wolves split into there groups and followed Amaya.       When they got there, the moon was full, glazeing off on the glisting rock, makeing it shine brightre then a angel wolfs gaze. Moona and Padded Paw stod togather as they and the whole pack waited for Amaya to give the first howl.... It broke the sudden silince and the wolves sang in.     Moona felt the ease in her high long howl. She realexed her mucles and studied her own gaze on the moon.      As the moon seemed to wink, there the whole pack stood, howling there notes into the air. Warming up the night sky, and  glamering themselves. From faraway Moona`s eyes shimerd and she playfuly sang to the moon, the pack singing with her threw the night.                  To Be contuied....       

 

 

       

 

 

  

 



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March 13, 2009
Usa Female
:P He He!! I luv it. I can't wait for the third.

December 24, 2008
Philippines Male
!Rise up as an anonymity!
And here I thought I wrote long stories! hehehe that was lovely
my dear. It surpasses my expectation for your stories, I meant it
went up and crashed into an airplane or something. Well done, you
must've put all effort into this.

Regarding DT's comment
> Well I see where she's coming from regarding the human-nature
implements, and I too see that. But hey, just a little error for a
first timer? As long as you don't repeat it. its cool! You'll do
better guranteed.
BUT B...you're gonna have to face the noise
to become more creative. The worst crticism can turn to the best
advice. Like my favorite quote of all time "By allowing strangers in
, can we find new ways to be ourselves." You've just got to take the
opinions you have been told and form them into a way to help you
better your next fic, understand.

In addition, people
please stop attacking her from every angle. If you haven't realized
she's quite young and for her to be writing at this age is simply
amazing. (i did't even start writing at this age) So just like LAY
OFF for a while kay?

December 20, 2008
Usa Female
i luv it!!

December 18, 2008
Usa Male
Not too bad lot-wise, but the wolves were too human to be realistic.
Using human implements (bottles for example) and a human timetable
seems slightly off. But apart from that and the spellng errors, it was
pretty good.

December 17, 2008
Usa Female
The wolf eyes is here! I repeat, the wolf eyes is here!

READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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