" Good mornig, young Moona." Amaya said. " You too." Moona awnsered. " Now," Amaya said." Let`s start hunting."   They crept into the wood`s in a crouching position. There belly`s touching the earthy ground.   A scent caught Moona`s  attion. " This way," She said. And they went towrds the smell.   They crashed threw thick brambles and bush`s. Soon they were standing on-top of a hill. Moona looked down. "Bayro`s camp!" Moona gasped and got lower.    "Aye." Amaya said. " Don`t worry. They won`t see us. Now, smell there scent agaian." Monna did as she was told. " You will find that scent more comman threw your life." Amaya contuied. " Another battle between Imoyed Pack and Bayros (Sysco) Pack is nearing."   Moona shook her head graverly. " Why do we always have to fight with that clan?" Moona asked watching Bayro`s pack scury everywere. " Bayro has no heart. He will kill everything in his pack if he want`s to. His father before him was the ruler and was like him. They are BOTH eveil. Bayro is just following in his father`s paw-prints. The wars are worked out in his clever mind. Only few can out-witt him. And I once tryed. I failed. But now, I think, if you get the right training, you can defet him, and then you can save the pack." Amaya went on in a grave tone. " You will face many danger`s in your life, and faceing him is just the begening."    Amaya felt a urge inside her. She swallowed it over and said. " Well, we can go back to hunting now right?" Amaya winked and nodded, following her back into the forest. " And,"  Amaya said. " Watch the master..."                    ******   They came back with 2 dead rabbits, 5 birds, and one baby deer.   Moona and Amaya left a plie infront of the howling rock in the gathering feild and went seprate way`s. Amaya, Healer`s den. Moona, her den.   She layed down and watched the commotion unravel. They headed straight towrd`s the food and got there share. Moona picked out Padded Paw from the gathering crowd, and watched her come towrd`s there den.    " So," Padded Paw said. " This is the food that you and Amaya hunted?" " Yep." "Wow." Moona licked between Padded Paw`s ears. " And what did you do today?" Moona asked, while now licking her tail. Padded Paw shruged. " I got to practice my fighting skill`s against Samo." Moona stoped. " Realy?" "Yes. And there`s more. I also got to practice gaurding the camp til`l 12:00."   " Sound`s good." Moona rested her head on the earth.  The sun was setting and the moon was getting stronger. Padded Paw was already asleep, and Moona smiled, drifting off into her dreamland.              Chaptpter Three: Skill`s   The earth was cool and the breeze was silently approching the camp. Moona looked around the den and adjusted her eyes to the bright sun. She groaned as she sat up and padded out onto the feild.   " Helow Moona." The voice stralted her as she saw Padded Paw wake up and walk over. " I heard that we have to use are fighting skill`s today." Moona said, looking out at the landscape.   " The Elders will be watching us, and will give us some advice."  Moona paused as she sniffed in air. " Jet is aproching."   Sure enough a black wolf came towrd`s them in lighting speed. She whiped around as she went passed them and said. " Are skills is needed now, the Elders would like us." Moona glanced at Padded Paw and hurried towrd`s the battle feild to practice.   The battle feild was surronded by trees,and the feild was grassy, filled with a few petunias and  the scent of the Scyco pack. " Good mornig young wolves." A elder, Maka, said as she dipped her head. The others echoed her and dipped there heads as well.    Moona shook her self and streched. " Now," Said Maka. " Please show us your pounceing skills. Moona, you go first."   Moona`s belly touched the grass as she bent down and rose her hackles. She pawed the air as she leaped threw the atmesphere. She laned with a thump and sat. " Very good." Maka said. " Now, Padded Paw." This contuied intill each one got 3 turns.   " Ok, we will move on to your fighting skill`s. It may be hard for some, but I think you guy`s can do it.   " Moona you will be atacking Jet. And Padded Paw, you will be atacking me."   Everyone got in there positions and started there fighting.  Moona growled and stared at Jet. They both blinked and Moona steped forward. She punced and landed heavingly on Jet. Jet gasped and swiped at Moona. It sent Moona to the ground and she winced. A fresh new scar appered right below her left eye. "Ha." Jet said. Moona got up and supprised Jet by atcking towrds her tummy. She caught her neck in her jaws and swung Jet to the ground. Then, growled into her ear. " Not so funny anymore huh?" Jet winced.   Moona looked around and saw Padded Paw and Maka`s fighing cease. " Moona, it look`s like you won in the battle with Jet." Moona smiled, then something grew in her mind. A bright light clouded her thoughts. Then, she was toppleing to the ground, laying infront of the world.                     ******

 

 

 

          Water splashed on her face and she woke up. She wasent laying in the Battle feild, but she was in a healers den. " She has woken!" A healer called. "Huh?" Moona said. Padded Paw came into veiw. " Moona! Well, you fainted in the feild. We brought you here. And the nurse said you can come out in a few minutes after she gives you some stuff to make you feal better."  She steped aside to let Kaya, one of three nurses come towrds Moona with a bottle full of liquid. " Drink this." She said and Moona bent down to drink it. Moona got up. " You are free to go." Kaya said and escourted them to the exit of the den.   Moona sighed and whipped her head around to face Padded Paw. " I only fantied when I was a pup before. And that was because I had a asthma atack. This one was diffrent. I saw a bright light then, I just fell to the ground."   Padded Paw nodded, then said. " I`ll make sure that it never happens again. And if it dose I will be there with you." Moona smiled and they both trotted to there den.    They layed down, with there paws streched out infront of them. Moona swept her tail across the dusty dirt ground. It blew a mini dust clud and shrank back to the earth. Moona yawned and reasted her shoulders.   Then she saw Balck paw race across the clearing. She smiled and said.  " Dosent he look handsome."  Padded Paw smiled tooo and said . " I know you like him." She paused to lick her paw. " Tonight when Amaya dose her speach, I will ask her if she can leave you and Black Paw in the clearing and let everyone leave. You and Black Paw will finaly get to know each other." 

 

 

 Moona looked down at her paws. " I don`t know if it`s going to work." Padded Paw shot her a funny gaze. " Trust me," She said. " It will all work out."                                        ******               Later on.....                                                    ******          The night was dark and the wolves came to the gathering feild right outside of there den`s. Moona and Padded Paw dodged threw the crowd and sat in the front row. Amaya howled and jumped up onto a rock called "the howling rock". She gave the wolves a stern look and breathed in.      " Now HUSH!" She yelled. She sat down and started again as the wolves hushed down. " I would like to talk about the prograss of our pack. We ahve just shown the Elders 3 young warroirs. They have shown them there fighting skill`s. Now, the Elders would like to talk...."

 

    She got down as Maka and the other Elders came up. " We would like to grade them. Moona, you get a A for very good fighting skill`s and doing well in other lessons. You are a very skilled wolf, and I honor you with the

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March 13, 2009
Usa Female
:P He He!! I luv it. I can't wait for the third.

December 24, 2008
Philippines Male
!Rise up as an anonymity!
And here I thought I wrote long stories! hehehe that was lovely
my dear. It surpasses my expectation for your stories, I meant it
went up and crashed into an airplane or something. Well done, you
must've put all effort into this.

Regarding DT's comment
> Well I see where she's coming from regarding the human-nature
implements, and I too see that. But hey, just a little error for a
first timer? As long as you don't repeat it. its cool! You'll do
better guranteed.
BUT B...you're gonna have to face the noise
to become more creative. The worst crticism can turn to the best
advice. Like my favorite quote of all time "By allowing strangers in
, can we find new ways to be ourselves." You've just got to take the
opinions you have been told and form them into a way to help you
better your next fic, understand.

In addition, people
please stop attacking her from every angle. If you haven't realized
she's quite young and for her to be writing at this age is simply
amazing. (i did't even start writing at this age) So just like LAY
OFF for a while kay?

December 20, 2008
Usa Female
i luv it!!

December 18, 2008
Usa Male
Not too bad lot-wise, but the wolves were too human to be realistic.
Using human implements (bottles for example) and a human timetable
seems slightly off. But apart from that and the spellng errors, it was
pretty good.

December 17, 2008
Usa Female
The wolf eyes is here! I repeat, the wolf eyes is here!

READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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