Athors note: This book is rated PG for blood, vilonce, and many other stuff. Also, all chars belong to me. If you care about my fealings dont copy my story or steal my chars in here. Thanks, uhh, still waiting? Read the story!!!!!!!!                     Members Of Packs      Imoyed Pack    Leader: Amaya. Black wolf with a white muzzle, and blue eyes. (Feamale)   Nurse`s & Healers:   Tammy. A brown wolf and the oldest healer. (Feamale)    Dreamer. A white wolf, and one of the new nurse`s. (Feamale)   Kaya. Once had pup`s of her own. The only one that has the abilty to work with medicnece fully and better than the other`s. (Feamale)       Eldest Wolves:   Maka. White wolf, tinged with gray on tail and on both ears. (Feamale)    Samo. Very wise. Drak brown wolf. (Male)    Spotted ear. Oldest wolf and has loss of hearing  in one ear. (Male)  Army Wolves:   Gnareld Face.  Has a very boxed face,(a little  smushed in. Male)   Jet. Black wolf. (Feamale)   Moona. Dark grey wolf,  with silver ears and sky blue eye`s. VERY BEAUTIFUL. (Feamale)    Paded Paw. Tan wolf with orange eyes. (Feamale)   Black paw. Golden wolf with red eye`s, and balck paws. VERY HANDSOME. (Male)   Big Tail. Over sized tail, with a thick layer of grey in it`s coat. (Male)   Simon. Stubborn and un-patient wolf. White fur, yellow eye`s.   Wickerseen. Brown wolf. (Feamale)    Pup`s:   Flower, Petal, Warrior, laso & Minno.    Mated Wolves:   Jet & Gnarled Face, Wickerseen & Simon, Mako & Samo.    Wolves Waiting to be accepted to the pack:   Tringe. Pale coat (Male)    Majacstic. Gray wolf. ( Feamale)     Scyco Pack   Leader: Bayro. A white wolf with Orange eyes. ( Male)   Nurses and Healers:   Tansi. A dark gray wolf. (Male)   Camre. A beautiful white wolf. (Feamale)   Tear. Gray wolf, with weird green eyes. ( Male)       Eldest Wolves:   Tara. A very old black wolf. (Feamale)   Keepson. (Male)   Creen. A wise wolf with a twisted tail. ( Male)   Army Wolves:   Icem. A very strange wolf with a loss of seeing. (Male)   Crane. (Male)   Teapart. A black wolf, that has never seen blood. (Feamale)   Kara. (Feamale)   Averi. A white wolf with glazeing yellow eyes. (Feamale)  Unique. (Feamale)   Koman. Son of Bayro. Eveil...(Male)  Treesway. A white wolf, green eyes. (Male)  Pups:   Trekker (Male)   Krenbe (Feamale)   Mated Wolves:   Kara & Crane. ( Had Krenbe & Trekker)                  Wolf eyes Book One:  Wolves of the mist          Chapter one: We won!    The wolf Amaya admired the shineing eyes stareing back at her. She winked and nodded, faceing the heavens. She let out a sigh and stared at the left side of the pack. They growled at there oppnets and stared at the right side of there pack. They winced and drew there heads away from the boiling eyes of the  Elders and the other pack. They were the youngest and were not ready. Amaya sighed. Besides the Elder one`s and other ones in the pack, in this war she was desprete, so she used all that she could.    "Go," She despretly wisphred. Then in a booming voice yelled. "FIGHT!" They charged and opened there jaws and grasped down on there enymys, letting there fealings spread and charge. The once calm steady feild they fought upon was know a bloody mess. They toppled and cringed, spreading the blood.    Amaya heard the light padding of paws. She closed her eyes and perpared for the atack. Before she knew it she was thrown up in the air, and then landing on a pack member. She winced but had no time to try save the wolf she smushed. She was taken by suprize. A face popped in-front of her and she dug her claws in its back. Beads of blood rippled down to make a deep puddle.    She looked into it`s eyes and found that it was Bayro, the alpha of the other wolf pack. He growled, showing jagged teeth. "Bayro!" She squinted her eyes at him. " Why do you challenge my pack when you know that we are stronger?" She rolled over and faced Bayro directly." WHY?" She demended.   He let out a shrill laugh. " Your pack? Strong? Pah! Yours is wimpy. I would choose you to fight even if you didint have a falter in your pack. Were stronger. And you know we are."   She bit her lip as she looked at the dieing wolf she had killed. " If we surrender still....we will win and be stonger in the heart. Bayaro laughed again and spat. " Heart. I have none!"  " Yes," Amaya anwsered. " yours is a black hole."   A shrill howl wisphed it`s way among the two armys. Someone had defeted a pack. But witch one won? Who shares the glory of winning?   They both turned there heads and saw that most of Bayros pack had fled. Amaya`s pack had more members now, but less that she started with. A lone wolf held a head of a wolf in its claws.  Amaya slyly smiled at Bayro. " See, I told you that we were going to win." She sharply bit him on the heel. " Now get off of my territory!" Bayro winced and darted back to his land, the rest of his pack following him, there faces glum and hidden in the darkness of the night.  Amaya waited intill Bayro was out of earshot and howled victory. Her pack echoed,and sent there new merryment threw the land.  A nurse headed up to Amaya. " Is it true lady Amaya? Have we won?" Amaya nodded and her eye`s glistend. " But not by I, she," Amaya smiled  greatfully at the beautifull silver wolf that claimed to win. Amaya wathched her beauty and orderd her to come over. " What is your name?" "Moona, Ma`am." Amaya nodded aproveingly. " My dear Moona, is it true you conquerd this wonder of winnning this for us?" "Yes," Moona shifted her feet and sighed as the liquid moon shone bright as the stars, maybye even brighter.   The wind overlapped her fur and she closed her eye`s. The wind was soothing and seemed to heal some of her old wounds and numb the fresh one`s from the  recent battle.   " Moona?" Amaya asked. Moona opened her eyes, and felt the hot rush of emberressment go in her. "Sorry." Amaya smiled and asked. " Would you like to come hunting with me tommorow mourning in the Kamost woods? The animales will just be wakeing up and we can get a fresh start.  "If you would, you will find me near the entrance of the wood`s." Moona beamed. " Of coarse!" " Ok, then don`t forget what I just told you." Moona noddded, and then Amaya walked a few step`s backwords, and howled. " Brotherins, join me in my den for a meeting." She looked once at the wolves and faced towrds her den and trotted away.    The rest of the wolves, ( inculdeing Moona) walked to Amaya`s den, dodgeing the dead wolf body`s that lay, infront of everyone, pulling there sadness, of the lives that they risked for the Imoyed pack.   " Hush everyone!" Amaya yelled as they enterd the den. They settled there-selves down, and held there faces to Amaya. "Now, we all, know of the disavange Bayro`s pack has. There fewer members now....But come mateing season and they will get more, and regain there strength. We will all try are best to multiply are numbers, and be the stronger pack.   " If we keep up are strength, then we will be ready for another war with Bayro`s pack. Then, if we falter...we will surely die."   Silince followed, and everyone was left fealing shaken. Amaya sunk to the ground as she heard the foot-step`s of another wolf. She turned her head and saw Padded Paw, her freind, looming over her like a shadow. " Hiya, Moona." She sat down and said. " I would just like to say that it was realy awesome that you won the war for us." Moona shruged. " It was nothin." " Well, it WAS something Moona. And what-ever it is, you were are saver." Moona smiled and watched Padded Paw slip away to her den. Moona got up and padded into her`s. She came down on her leaf and bramble bed, the victory of tonight`s win clouding her head.        Chapter Two: "Watch the master."  She was lead by light. And the howling of other wolves. She was running from a fear...a fear she had to discover. Another howl broke the silince and she was knocked out..helpless and shaken.  She woke up and sped out of her den. '"You will find me by the entrance to the woods."' Moona replayed that in her head and soon found Amaya standing by the woods.   " Good mornig, young

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March 13, 2009
Usa Female
:P He He!! I luv it. I can't wait for the third.

December 24, 2008
Philippines Male
!Rise up as an anonymity!
And here I thought I wrote long stories! hehehe that was lovely
my dear. It surpasses my expectation for your stories, I meant it
went up and crashed into an airplane or something. Well done, you
must've put all effort into this.

Regarding DT's comment
> Well I see where she's coming from regarding the human-nature
implements, and I too see that. But hey, just a little error for a
first timer? As long as you don't repeat it. its cool! You'll do
better guranteed.
BUT B...you're gonna have to face the noise
to become more creative. The worst crticism can turn to the best
advice. Like my favorite quote of all time "By allowing strangers in
, can we find new ways to be ourselves." You've just got to take the
opinions you have been told and form them into a way to help you
better your next fic, understand.

In addition, people
please stop attacking her from every angle. If you haven't realized
she's quite young and for her to be writing at this age is simply
amazing. (i did't even start writing at this age) So just like LAY
OFF for a while kay?

December 20, 2008
Usa Female
i luv it!!

December 18, 2008
Usa Male
Not too bad lot-wise, but the wolves were too human to be realistic.
Using human implements (bottles for example) and a human timetable
seems slightly off. But apart from that and the spellng errors, it was
pretty good.

December 17, 2008
Usa Female
The wolf eyes is here! I repeat, the wolf eyes is here!

READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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