He He!! I luv it. I can't wait for the third.

And here I thought I wrote long stories! hehehe that was lovely
my dear. It surpasses my expectation for your stories, I meant it
went up and crashed into an airplane or something. Well done, you
must've put all effort into this.

Regarding DT's comment
> Well I see where she's coming from regarding the human-nature
implements, and I too see that. But hey, just a little error for a
first timer? As long as you don't repeat it. its cool! You'll do
better guranteed.
BUT B...you're gonna have to face the noise
to become more creative. The worst crticism can turn to the best
advice. Like my favorite quote of all time "By allowing strangers in
, can we find new ways to be ourselves." You've just got to take the
opinions you have been told and form them into a way to help you
better your next fic, understand.

In addition, people
please stop attacking her from every angle. If you haven't realized
she's quite young and for her to be writing at this age is simply
amazing. (i did't even start writing at this age) So just like LAY
OFF for a while kay?

i luv it!!

Not too bad lot-wise, but the wolves were too human to be realistic.
Using human implements (bottles for example) and a human timetable
seems slightly off. But apart from that and the spellng errors, it was
pretty good.

The wolf eyes is here! I repeat, the wolf eyes is here!

READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!