stone. " Go," He said. I shook my head, wich was dumb of me beacuse I realized my head ached also.  " Fine," He said. " Me and her are going." Nick said, turning around with a greatfull Samantha prancing at his side. I tried to follow them but pain slowed my down and I stoped. I hung my head, whispering. " The pain's to much." 

 

               Chapter four

         Pain come twice in your life? 

 

I dont know how long I layed there. It felt like yeard, but probally only a few hours. The moon was glowing and the stars were out.

To me, my life was ruined. And I could never go back to it.

2 B CONTUIED IN PART 3!

 

 

              



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November 14, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
Hee hee. Thanks. How is the writing odd?

November 14, 2009
Usa Male
The writing's a bit odd, and I'm ticked off at Nick for treating Jenna that way. On the other hand, she gets Balto, so too bad for him.

November 14, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
Thanks.
:P

October 10, 2009
Usa Female
Luxray FTW!!!
Ooh, I love your fanfics! Blah, Samantha/Sam is so mean! But I love it anyways. :icon14:

July 03, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
*5 sorry
I LOVE THIS ONE

July 03, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
s pages so far°x°

July 02, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
I LOVE THE SECOND ONE SOOOOO MUCH! When it comes out I want you to read it! (3 pg's so far!!!!!!!!!!!!WoOoOoOoO!lol :P °x° )

July 02, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
:cry: No one exept me, and my sis, has read the first one...:(

July 01, 2009
Usa Female
SBModOfBBS/WebRankerForBambiS
I hope all of you will love the second one when It comes out. :P




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