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| January 06, 2008 | ||
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One of the best fanfics I've ever read Killing one character does bring some inventive material...Can't wait for the last part! |
| November 01, 2007 | ||
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| WQ > Balto > WoC |
OMG, Part 3 is up! Just wanted to tell ya, if you didn't already know. It's much longer than the previous parts of her story, but prepare for some good stuff! (Oh, and it may not be perfect. If you notice anything wrong, just write it in a critique or PM me if it's too spoilery.) |
| November 03, 2007 | ||
I dunno how my attention span lasted through 17 pages @_@ It was good tho! The random Everett kinda confused me, but I still can't wait for the Epilogue XD Oh, and I like how you related alot of Aleu's story with everyone elses. I thought that was cool |
| January 11, 2008 | ||
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| WQ > Balto > WoC |
Steet: Wow! Thanks for finding time in your busy schedule to read it! Yeah, it's sad that when you lose one character more interesting plots come out of it, but that's the way things go, I guess. I have the Epilogue for Aleu's Tale finished, but the last part of her story is very long (so far it's about 50 pages on Word . . . when on Read mode! Seriously, it is!) and about halfway completed. Besides, her story develops as she gets to understand who she is and what she eventually wishes to happen. The ending will probably make readers cry - fair warning! - so this will be worth waiting for in the end! I really appreciate your comments, everyone! UPDATE - I've written a new TLK fic called "If Given the Chance . . ."; please read and comment! - Juuchan17 |
| February 10, 2008 | ||
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| Belle's Ice River pack |
Woooooooooooooooo! That...was...AWESOME! I'm so sad I hadn't read
it sooner. Normally, I like to give a little critique, but I've got nothing to say. Way to go! Can't wait for the next part. |
| January 16, 2009 | ||
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Wow you are such a good writer. I think you can compare to Richard
Adams who wrote Watership Down. And that is one great book! |
![]() | November 07, 2007 | |
Hehe...I loved it! I wonder if the prisoner really is her father ...But I've got a question too...does White Feather have the same parents as Balto which makes them related? |
| November 06, 2007 | ||
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I liked this one. And, agreeing with Cat, relating Aleu's stories with the others was a good idea. Everett and Aleu's relationship came rather fast but that's okay. The prisoner is her father... wonder how she'll take that? Good part. Can't wait for the epilogue |
holiday season, the usual . . .) Anywho, here's some
answers:
Cat14: Actually, I can't believe this
part lasted for so long . . . and it's only spans less than
a day! WOW. Anyway, there are reasons to explain why certain
things are happening (such as the random Everett thing, and
her hearing about how everyone she meets came to be), but
all will be explained in the final part of Aleu's Tale! (And
most likely, it'll be longer than Part III was . . . or
shorter . . . I don't know at the moment because I'm still
working on the beginning of the Epilogue) Glad you liked it
though!
Brown Wolf: Yeah, it is still
Springtime (because I think the litter in WQ was actually
born in mid-spring . . . and since Aleu's not quite a
yearling yet . . . do you get what I mean?), and I guess I
made Aleu get bitten by the Love Bug a little early. XD But
yeah, I thought that little part would help show how naive
she really is to the world while also learning about the
wolf blood within her. But for the other stuff that you're
wondering about, you'll just have to wait until I finish the
final part! HEHEHEHE.
Fernmask: Glad you like
it! Again, you'll have to find out just like everyone else.
It's a secret . . . shh! XD
UPDATE: Also, I
have completed the first part of a new story about a
forgotten hero, so be sure to check it out and tell me what
you think! Also, Part I of "By Sun and Moon" will be up soon
. . . maybe sometime next week if I can get away from home
at a decent time! And finally, I will be sponsoring a
songwriting contest for one of my later fanfics - more info
to come soon but the first part of the story will be up by
Christmas, I promise!
Until next time,
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Juuchan17