around slowly in the center of the living room. She closed her eyes in pure bliss and felt peace wash over her for the first time in a long time. Balto sensed her calm, and he smiled again and closed his eyes, too. They were caught up in a whirl of bright color and song…when the music suddenly changed to a rollicking tune like a lively waltz with a multitude of fiddles and six-strings.
Balto and Jenna stopped, confused, and then burst out laughing at the ridiculousness of it all. They tried to dance to it, but ended up mostly bouncing, laughing until they were out of breath, and then flopping onto Jenna’s blue cushion.
Still chuckling, Jenna burrowed her muzzle into Balto’s neck. Balto licked the edge of her face, and they lay quietly side by side as the radio once again switched, this time to a song with a more measured pace.
Jenna sighed happily. “I love you, Balto.”
Balto kissed her and grinned broadly. “I love you, too, Jen.”
Jenna suddenly scowled and shuddered. “I should’ve never let Tumak call me that,” she growled, “It wasn’t his place. He was trying to replace you. And I almost let him. I should’ve never let him get so close. I’m sorry, Balto.”
Balto’s eyes were unblinking and filled with understanding. “Jenna.” He pulled her close and brought his face down to hers. “Listen. It wasn’t your fault. Your mother had just passed away, and then to lose me…well, it’s no wonder you couldn’t think straight. Tumak knew that, and he used it to get to you. He wasn’t altogether in his right mind, either, but to try to kill me in order to have you, well…I’m just glad I got back when I did.”
Jenna snuggled against his warm side. “I’m glad you could tell me about Lila,” she said quietly, “Even though I know it must have been hard. Thank you for…staying true to me.” He had told her everything.
Balto reddened slightly. “I love you, Jen. I could never betray you.” He shook his head, and his content glow diminished slightly. “Though there seemed to be a lot of betrayal going on then.”
“What do you mean?”
“Well, Tumak betrayed me and you by trying to murder me and lying to Talon and then you,” Balto began, “Lila betrayed me by telling Talon I killed Sanctus on purpose, though that was for her own protection. And I betrayed the dogs of Stanton by not telling them who I really was. If I had, then no one would’ve blamed me for Sanctus’ murder. If everyone hadn’t been hiding from someone else, then…then none of this would have happened.” He stopped with a silent sigh, and looked straight into Jenna’s eyes. “It was a foolish masquerade, and I’m glad it’s over.”
Jenna looked at him a long time, and then nodded agreement.
Outside, above the window, icicles clicked together musically, as if waiting for one of them to fall.
Balto, Jenna, Sylvie, Dixie, Kodi, Saba, Dingo, Rosy, and Rosy’s parents © Universal Studios
Tumak, Khara, Soenor, Cooper, Ruby, Trey, Lake, Jewel, Ranger, Talon, Lila, Sanctus, Nana, and Hazel © redwolf03
Closer to You © Mark Schultz
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| January 31, 2009 | ||
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If this was your last fic then it was your greatest, goodbye Balto
source's friend and the best fanfic writer it has ever had. |
| December 26, 2008 | ||
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It was awesome! I'm sorry you have to go! But is their some way to convise you to stay? Your work is wonderful! Will your work be on another site? If not it was a pleasure reading them! |
| October 31, 2008 | ||
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| The MCR-my! |
It's so sad to hear that this is our last work. I love your style
of writing, and I will definitely come back to read your other fanfictions. Goodbye redwolf03. |
| October 06, 2008 | ||
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| Belle's Ice River pack |
This was a simply wonderful fic and was very enjoyable to read. All the conflicts seemed well planned, not just thrown out there, and they all tied together nicely. Though, adding Balto's little speech at the end helped clarify any confusion, and that was helpful to me! I'm very sorry to see you go, redwolf03, but I understand that you have places to go and people to see. You're on to bigger and better things, but that doesn't mean we won't miss you around here. I certainly hope you continue writing, wherever you go, and never give it up! You have a true talent with a pen, and I believe it can take you anywhere. I want to thank you one last time for all of the comments and reviews you ever left for me. Yours were almost invariably the longest and most helpful, and I really appreciate that. If you're really leaving Balto Source for good, then I salute you. Write on! |
| October 06, 2008 | ||
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| Say wut? |
Excellent! Very good...though I was a little surprised at what
Jenna did at the end. (Trying not to spoil the story, ) I'm so sad you're not going to write anymore! But the fanfiction you DID write was superb. |
| October 04, 2008 | ||
It is with great reluctance I write this review, knowing that once
I post this it will most likely be my last review for your stories. I'm very sorry to see you set your pen aside, your fics were well crafted and they were a super read! Hopefully, you will still pop in now and again... I enjoyed talking to you on the occassions you commented or vice versa. On Masquerade, I was disgusted at Tumak's audacity, and I was a little scared for Jenna when she began to act a wee bit too forward with him. It was a nice plot twist to see Talon and Tumak work together, though it felt a little rushed as a whole. I think the only thing that made me grimace a little was when Jenna unleashed her fury. It seemed a little... almost out of character for her to be THAT vicious. I can see her doing it, but the circumstances didn't seem like it should have prompted the level of rage she displayed. Either that, or I'm just being too critical. *laughs* All in all, it was an enjoyable read! Well done. Hopefully, you won't quit writing for good. Perhaps you can go to fanfiction.net and post some stories there, if you wish. Either way, I'll keep a lookout for you elsewhere online. *salutes* Bye! |
| October 04, 2008 | ||
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wow so sad to hear this is your final work mate, you've been
sitting in my select favourites for fanfic authors for so long and to see you out with a new one only to end your time here But hey a great last fanfic mate, really good read. Very deep and moving and a fitting end, nice one mate and hope you decide to keep Balto with you |
| October 02, 2008 | ||
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It is with a heavy heart that I see you hang up your pen,
redwolf03. You were my first friend here, and I hope it may continue to be so even now that you have stopped writing. But please don't leave altogether, or this site will be the worse off without you. As for the story, I found it unique among your works; truly a memorable end. |
| October 30, 2008 | ||
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| WQ > Balto > WoC |
Well, you outdid yourself, Redwolf. This was quite an interesting story with twists, drama, and great dialogue. That's one of your strengths - dialogue, whether aloud or in thought. I didn't expect most of the things that eventually took place, and you made it so suspenseful until the final line. Well done! Overall, I enjoyed this and I'm heartbroken that this is your last here. *bows* I am not worthy. Seriously. - Juuchan17 |