could feel the anger bubbling within her even before Balto had spoken, but now that she knew the truth her rage cut through her heart like white flames and set her eyes on fire. Tumak took a step back in fear of this new Jenna, and she stepped forward right along with him. “So, you lied to me,” she growled as she stepped forward, Tumak backing away from her inch by inch. “You tried to murder my mate. Then you tried to take me as your prize.” She glared at him with contempt. “And to think I actually felt sorry for you, that I even let you come near me–!”

 

          Tumak tripped with his back legs as he stepped away from Jenna’s wrath, and scrambled back up. “But I wasn’t lying,” he pleaded, “I-I was just so taken with you. I am. That’s why I did all those things. I love you so much, Jen–”

 

          “It’s Jenna,” she spat, and Balto smiled.

 

          Tumak’s face was bitter. “Jenna, then. I–”

 

          “No,” Jenna snapped, “Shut up. I don’t want to hear another lying, scheming, sweetened, sugary word from your mouth. I am so sick of everyone taking advantage of me just because I’m pretty! I am so tired of being used, and manipulated, and-and betrayed beyond anything my heart can take.” Her eyes felt like they were burning, she was so angry. Any trace of tears had vanished. Tumak looked at her in awe, in love with her even now. She looked so fearsome, a beast within the beauty. It was like nothing he had ever seen before.

 

          But Jenna wasn’t finished. She glowered at Tumak with unwavering hatred and spat, “I don’t care what happens to you…” She slowly brought her paw up, and then slashed at his face. Tumak’s head cocked to the right, and he gasped in pain and surprise. Even Balto was looking a little scared.

 

          Jenna snarled, “As long as you die…” Her paw flew up again, and Tumak’s head cocked to the left with a louder gasp.

 

          He panted, and tried to appeal to her gentler nature one last time. “Jenna…”

 

          Her eyes fairly crackled as she growled, “And join your precious Khara forever!” She pushed Tumak against the house with all her might, and Tumak hit with a pained gasp and sank to the ground.

 

          Balto heard a familiar snapping noise. All three looked up in time to see an icicle crack off the edge of the roof. It plummeted through the cold air and plunged into Tumak’s back.

 

 

          Rosy wouldn’t let go of Balto’s neck the whole time they were in the waiting room, waiting for news of Tumak’s condition. She wrapped her arms around him and stroked his fur and whispered his name while she cried silent tears for Tumak, who she had discovered when she had gone to the door to see what was banging against the house. Jenna sat away from Rosy, staring straight ahead with fighting emotions broadcasted on her face.

 

          Rosy’s parents stood as soon as the doctor re-entered the room.

 

          “How is he, Doctor?” her father asked.

 

          “Yes, will he be all right?” her mother chimed in.

 

          “Well, I…” The doctor glanced at Rosy and hesitated, and then sighed. “I’m afraid not. He has severe internal and external bleeding, and frankly this is a very unique situation, and nothing much can be done. My best guess would be that he went after Jenna there, and Balto tried to protect her, and the fight threw him up against the house. All I’m saying is, he doesn’t have much time left. So if you want to say goodbye to him, that is, if you’ve grown attached to him at all, you need to do it now.” The doctor tried to say it gently, but Rosy gave a high-pitched gasp and buried her face in Balto’s fur. Balto nudged her head with his nose sympathetically, and then looked over at Jenna. Her head was hanging in shame, and the look in her eyes was stormy.

 

          Rosy’s father looked at his weeping daughter and put a hand on her head, muttering, “That animal shelter! They can’t keep one mutt inside…! I’m going to…to do something about his when we get back…” He trailed off, muttering angrily and shaking his head.

 

          Rosy stood and wiped her tear-streaked face with the back of her hand. She shuffled forward, and then when Balto’s eyes followed her mournfully, she stopped and asked, “C-Can Balto and Jenna come with me?”

 

          “Rosy…” her mother chided, but the doctor seemed to consider it.

 

          He eyed Balto questioningly, and then said, “Well, if you’re sure Balto’s under control…it can’t hurt now.”

 

          Jenna gave a bitter laugh that only Balto heard. No one even suspected her of savagery and abuse.

 

          Rosy, Balto, and Jenna solemnly filed past the doctor and into a room filled with resting patients in kennels and cages, past them to another white-walled, quiet room where Tumak lay on a small cot, covered in bandages with a teal sheet covering the worst of the damage.

 

          Rosy stood frozen in the doorway, her lower lip trembling, but she set her jaw determinedly and strode towards the bed. Tumak turned over slightly at the sound of her footsteps, but he yelped in pain with any movement.

 

          Rosy bit her lip, and her hand hovered over his back. “Goodbye. I’m sorry about…everything. I didn’t think Balto would do something like that to anyone. I don’t know what happened, but…I’m sorry. I didn’t even get to name you. I would’ve kept you if my mom let me. I promise I would have! But it’s too late. So…goodbye.” She gently touched his back and stepped away. She stopped just inside the doorway to wait for Balto and Jenna, and before she was halfway there Tumak moaned as if his heart were breaking.

 

          Jenna gave Balto a look, and they both crept hesitantly to the edge of the cot. Tumak’s green-gold eyes were glazed as if he were already fading. He focused on Balto, blinked, then focused on Jenna, and his eyes slowly closed.

 

          Balto exchanged another nervous glance with Jenna, and cleared his throat. “Uh…Tumak?” he whispered.

 

          Tumak’s eyes snapped open in an instant, and when he looked at Balto in them Balto saw the deepest, darkest grief of anyone he had ever seen. But there was something about Tumak, something about his eyes; they were too bright. He was in another time, another place, buried in the ghastly memories of his past.

 

          “Soenor,” Tumak choked out, his throat constricted with sadness, “Brother. Oh, just kill me, just kill me now.”

 

          “Why?” Balto stammered, “What’s wrong?”

 

          Tumak heaved in a breath, his eyes glistening wet. “She’s gone…She’s dead, gone…Khara…And our pups. If only Death would be merciful and take me, too…”

 

          Balto realized with a twisted pang that Tumak was about to get his wish. “It’ll be all right, Tumak,” he mumbled, “It’ll be okay.”

 

          Jenna stood staring at Tumak’s agonized face. Her eyes were little darts of furious fire, but as she clenched her teeth as she watched his grief, they cooled a little. Finally, when he faced the deepest hell inside his soul, she murmured quietly, “I can’t forgive you yet for what you’ve done, and I’m not sorry for what I did. But I am sorry…it had to come to this.”

 

          She leaned down and kissed his cheek, and Tumak relaxed, and was gone.

 

 

          A few weeks later, when Balto and Jenna had a rare night alone, the radio played classical music softly while all but two of the lamps were gently blown out. Normally classical would have bored them both, but this piece seemed to harmonize with the song of the wind outside, the violins soaring over everything while the cellos seemed to disappear within their own deep thrumming.

 

          Balto turned to Jenna with a twinkle in his softly-glowing eyes. Everything was ready. He knew they both needed this, after the past couple weeks.

 

          “Shall we dance?” he asked her with a knowing smile.

 

          Jenna’s eyes sparkled in the semi-darkness. “Yes,” she whispered with delight, and before she knew it he had pressed his cheek to hers and they were revolving around slowly in the



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January 31, 2009
Usa Female
If this was your last fic then it was your greatest, goodbye Balto source's friend and the best fanfic writer it has ever had.

December 26, 2008
Usa Female
It was awesome! I'm sorry you have to go! But is their some way
to convise you to stay? Your work is wonderful! Will your work be on
another site? If not it was a pleasure reading them!

October 31, 2008
Usa
The MCR-my!
It's so sad to hear that this is our last work. I love your style of
writing, and I will definitely come back to read your other
fanfictions. Goodbye redwolf03.

October 06, 2008
Usa Male
Belle's Ice River pack
This was a simply wonderful fic and was very enjoyable to read. All
the conflicts seemed well planned, not just thrown out there, and they
all tied together nicely. Though, adding Balto's little speech at the
end helped clarify any confusion, and that was helpful to me!

I'm very sorry to see you go, redwolf03, but I understand
that you have places to go and people to see. You're on to bigger and
better things, but that doesn't mean we won't miss you around here. I
certainly hope you continue writing, wherever you go, and never give
it up! You have a true talent with a pen, and I believe it can take
you anywhere.
I want to thank you one last time for all of the
comments and reviews you ever left for me. Yours were almost
invariably the longest and most helpful, and I really appreciate that.
If you're really leaving Balto Source for good, then I salute
you. Write on!

October 06, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
Excellent! Very good...though I was a little surprised at what Jenna
did at the end. (Trying not to spoil the story, ) I'm so sad
you're not going to write anymore! But the fanfiction you DID
write was superb.

October 04, 2008
It is with great reluctance I write this review, knowing that once I
post this it will most likely be my last review for your stories. I'm
very sorry to see you set your pen aside, your fics were well crafted
and they were a super read! Hopefully, you will still pop in now and
again... I enjoyed talking to you on the occassions you commented or
vice versa.

On Masquerade, I was disgusted at Tumak's
audacity, and I was a little scared for Jenna when she began to act a
wee bit too forward with him. It was a nice plot twist to see Talon
and Tumak work together, though it felt a little rushed as a whole. I
think the only thing that made me grimace a little was when Jenna
unleashed her fury. It seemed a little... almost out of character for
her to be THAT vicious. I can see her doing it, but the circumstances
didn't seem like it should have prompted the level of rage she
displayed.

Either that, or I'm just being too critical.
*laughs* All in all, it was an enjoyable read! Well done.

Hopefully, you won't quit writing for good. Perhaps you can go to
fanfiction.net and post some stories there, if you wish. Either way,
I'll keep a lookout for you elsewhere online. *salutes* Bye!

October 04, 2008
Uk Male
wow so sad to hear this is your final work mate, you've been sitting
in my select favourites for fanfic authors for so long and to see you
out with a new one only to end your time here But hey a great last
fanfic mate, really good read. Very deep and moving and a fitting end,
nice one mate and hope you decide to keep Balto with you

October 02, 2008
Usa Male
It is with a heavy heart that I see you hang up your pen, redwolf03.
You were my first friend here, and I hope it may continue to be so
even now that you have stopped writing. But please don't leave
altogether, or this site will be the worse off without you.
As
for the story, I found it unique among your works; truly a memorable
end.

October 30, 2008
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
Well, you outdid yourself, Redwolf. This was quite an interesting
story with twists, drama, and great dialogue. That's one of your
strengths - dialogue, whether aloud or in thought. I didn't expect
most of the things that eventually took place, and you made it so
suspenseful until the final line. Well done!

Overall, I
enjoyed this and I'm heartbroken that this is your last here. *bows* I
am not worthy. Seriously.

- Juuchan17

November 08, 2008
Usa Female
Looking for one to take me in
This is your best fic yet. I really want it to be a movie! I'm sad tht this is your last work here on BS. Maybe one day you can write one more, maybe, when your life gets less hectic. But who am I to pressure you into doing that? Just consider...




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