Masquerade

 

          Balto padded into the dimly-lit living room and gazed out the window. Snow fell in white torrents, and starflowers of ice frosted the glass. It was a nasty night storm.

 

          He shivered, glad to be inside a warm, cozy house instead of a creaky old boat with nothing but a thin brown blanket to huddle under. He had survived nights like that when he had been younger and without a home, but now in his aging years he was perfectly suited to his life with Jenna.

 

          He looked over his shoulder to find his mate of nearly four years curled up near the fireplace on her blue cushion. A cheery fire swirled and snapped behind the grate, and reflections of the flames danced in her distant eyes. Balto smiled, and padded over to stand next to her. “Mind if I join you?”

 

          Jenna blinked away her trance and smiled back. “Not at all.”

 

          He sank down behind her, pulling her to him so she fit perfectly against his side, and together they stared into the leaping ruby flames in companionable silence.

 

          “What a day,” Jenna sighed happily, “Though it’s wonderful to end it like this.” She leaned against him and ran her nose through his fur. “I wish we’d had more times like these when the pups were here.”

 

          Balto grinned. “Yeah.” He kissed the back of her neck. “So, what’s up with you?”

 

          Jenna’s eyes gazed upward as she thought. “Well, Kodi has another mail run tomorrow. But it’s all the way to Anchorage! That’ll be their last stop, and then they’ll race there. I told him to be careful, being so far away, but I know he’ll be fine. Saba’s come down sick with something, I’m not sure what, but I’ve been sending Dingo to check on her everyday. Oh, and Dingo–”

 

          Balto broke in with a dry chuckle, shaking his head. “The pups are long gone, but you still talk about them like they’re still here. I asked about you, Jen. What you’re doing, not the kids.”

 

        Jenna flushed, embarrassment darkening her eyes. “Well–” She tried again. “Well–” She sighed. “I don’t know. I guess I’ve been Mom for so long, I can’t stop and just be Jenna for awhile.” She looked up at him, and then down at her paws with a shy smile. “Oh, I don’t mind that much. It’s good to see how happy they all are.”

 

          “But don’t you ever get tired of being a mother-of-all-work?” Balto asked with genuine curiosity, “Wouldn’t you rather have more, I don’t know…excitement?”

 

          Jenna raised one eyebrow as a wry smile touched her lips. “Balto, I’ve just finished raising ten kids. Excitement is the last thing I need.” She kissed him on the mouth and rubbed her paws across his chest. “It would be wonderful if everything could just stay like this.”

 

          A faint scratching came at the door.

 

          Balto and Jenna sat up and looked at each other.

 

          “That couldn’t be excitement come calling, could it?” Jenna said.

 

          The scratching continued more insistently.

 

          “I’ll get it!” Rosy yelled. Ten year old Rosy shuffled from her bedroom to the door in her slippers and a pink robe thrown over her pajamas.

 

          Balto and Jenna heard the squeak of the turning doorknob and the creak of the opening door. There was a burst of cold air and a thud of something falling to the floor.

 

          “Mom!” Rosy screamed.

 

 

          The stoop-shouldered old doctor bent over the scrawny mutt shivering among the blankets piled on the kitchen floor for a makeshift bed. The dog was brown-gray with green-gold eyes. Those eyes were half open as he thrashed randomly in his state of unconsciousness.

 

          The doctor checked him over and turned to Rosy’s mother. “He’ll be all right. He’s just very cold and very tired. Keep him warm, and I would place a ‘Found’ bulletin in the newspaper so someone can claim him. Judging by his condition and the lack of a collar, though, he’s been on the streets for awhile.”

 

          “We’ll take good care of him!” Rosy piped, loosening her hands from her mother’s skirts where she had been clinging. “Won’t we, Mom?”

 

          Her mother’s smile was a little strained but still kind. “Yes, we will. Thank you, Doctor.”

 

          The doctor accepted his pay and nodded to her. “Good day.” He let himself out the door and traipsed off through the crisp morning after last night’s storm.

 

          “Oh, boy,” Rosy cried, jumping up and running off, “I’ll get more blankets. And hot water bottles! And he’ll need food when he wakes up! I’ll take good care of him, Mom! Can I keep him?”

 

          Rosy’s mother sighed. “One thing at a time, Rosy,” she said before following her daughter resignedly.

 

          Jenna, who had been standing in the kitchen doorway with Balto the whole time, crept closer to the street dog. She stared down at the stranger who had fallen at Rosy’s feet when she opened the door last night. How had he had the strength to scratch at the door to alert them? He had been nearly frozen through when he had fallen into the foyer. Why had he scratched at the door at all? Street dogs didn’t trust people.

 

          Balto came up beside her. “He’ll be fine, Jen. The doctor said so.”

 

          She nodded and bit her lip. Suddenly the dog jerked upwards. His eyes snapped open all the way, and they seemed to be in a distant, dream-like trance. His eyes fastened on Balto, and his mouth split into a wide grin. “Brother! Oh, my brother Soenor! I’ve found her! I’ve found her, just like you said!”

 

          Balto was uncertain how to respond. Obviously the dog was delirious and confusing him with someone else. “Uh…who?” he asked.

 

          “Khara!” he burst out, “The perfect mate for me! She’s so beautiful. You simply can’t imagine…But you were right, brother. I found her. I’ll never doubt you again.” Then his eyes became unfocused, and he dropped back down into a restless sleep.

 

          Balto looked over to see the faintest glitter of tears in Jenna’s eyes. “Jen,” he said gently, “It’s all right.”

 

          She shook her head. “Khara,” she explained softly, “I wonder where she is now.”

 

 

          Jenna softly padded into the quiet corner of the kitchen and gazed sympathetically at the stranger who lay tense and quivering on his nest of bedding. The blanket she was carrying in her mouth dropped to the floor as her brow furrowed in an attempt to figure out how to get the covering over him without disturbing him. Rosy was at school, Rosy’s father was at work, Rosy’s mother was running errands, and Balto was saying goodbye to Kodi before his run to Anchorage. Jenna would have gone to see him off, too, but she felt guilty about leaving the sick dog at home by himself.

 

          “You go,” she had told Balto, “Kodi knows what I would say: good luck, and be careful. Just tell him I love him, and that I know he’ll win. Okay?”

 

          Balto’s expression was a mix of surprise and concern. “Are you sure, Jen?”

 

          She had nodded, and so Balto had reluctantly left by himself. Now she was alone in the house with the stranger.

 

          Jenna edged the blanket forward with her paw, and then decided to take it up in her teeth and drag it over his shivering body. The moment she did this his quaking ceased, and he opened two bleary eyes that slowly roamed over his surroundings and then found her own.

 

          Jenna hastily backed up a few steps so he wouldn’t get the wrong idea. His eyes had been so startling, though, it took her a few moments to compose herself.

 

          “Um, hi. I’m Jenna,” she said by way of introduction, “You looked cold, so I thought you might need something else to keep warm.”

 

          He stared at her. His eyes were



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January 31, 2009
Usa Female
If this was your last fic then it was your greatest, goodbye Balto source's friend and the best fanfic writer it has ever had.

December 26, 2008
Usa Female
It was awesome! I'm sorry you have to go! But is their some way
to convise you to stay? Your work is wonderful! Will your work be on
another site? If not it was a pleasure reading them!

October 31, 2008
Usa
The MCR-my!
It's so sad to hear that this is our last work. I love your style of
writing, and I will definitely come back to read your other
fanfictions. Goodbye redwolf03.

October 06, 2008
Usa Male
Belle's Ice River pack
This was a simply wonderful fic and was very enjoyable to read. All
the conflicts seemed well planned, not just thrown out there, and they
all tied together nicely. Though, adding Balto's little speech at the
end helped clarify any confusion, and that was helpful to me!

I'm very sorry to see you go, redwolf03, but I understand
that you have places to go and people to see. You're on to bigger and
better things, but that doesn't mean we won't miss you around here. I
certainly hope you continue writing, wherever you go, and never give
it up! You have a true talent with a pen, and I believe it can take
you anywhere.
I want to thank you one last time for all of the
comments and reviews you ever left for me. Yours were almost
invariably the longest and most helpful, and I really appreciate that.
If you're really leaving Balto Source for good, then I salute
you. Write on!

October 06, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
Excellent! Very good...though I was a little surprised at what Jenna
did at the end. (Trying not to spoil the story, ) I'm so sad
you're not going to write anymore! But the fanfiction you DID
write was superb.

October 04, 2008
It is with great reluctance I write this review, knowing that once I
post this it will most likely be my last review for your stories. I'm
very sorry to see you set your pen aside, your fics were well crafted
and they were a super read! Hopefully, you will still pop in now and
again... I enjoyed talking to you on the occassions you commented or
vice versa.

On Masquerade, I was disgusted at Tumak's
audacity, and I was a little scared for Jenna when she began to act a
wee bit too forward with him. It was a nice plot twist to see Talon
and Tumak work together, though it felt a little rushed as a whole. I
think the only thing that made me grimace a little was when Jenna
unleashed her fury. It seemed a little... almost out of character for
her to be THAT vicious. I can see her doing it, but the circumstances
didn't seem like it should have prompted the level of rage she
displayed.

Either that, or I'm just being too critical.
*laughs* All in all, it was an enjoyable read! Well done.

Hopefully, you won't quit writing for good. Perhaps you can go to
fanfiction.net and post some stories there, if you wish. Either way,
I'll keep a lookout for you elsewhere online. *salutes* Bye!

October 04, 2008
Uk Male
wow so sad to hear this is your final work mate, you've been sitting
in my select favourites for fanfic authors for so long and to see you
out with a new one only to end your time here But hey a great last
fanfic mate, really good read. Very deep and moving and a fitting end,
nice one mate and hope you decide to keep Balto with you

October 02, 2008
Usa Male
It is with a heavy heart that I see you hang up your pen, redwolf03.
You were my first friend here, and I hope it may continue to be so
even now that you have stopped writing. But please don't leave
altogether, or this site will be the worse off without you.
As
for the story, I found it unique among your works; truly a memorable
end.

October 30, 2008
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
Well, you outdid yourself, Redwolf. This was quite an interesting
story with twists, drama, and great dialogue. That's one of your
strengths - dialogue, whether aloud or in thought. I didn't expect
most of the things that eventually took place, and you made it so
suspenseful until the final line. Well done!

Overall, I
enjoyed this and I'm heartbroken that this is your last here. *bows* I
am not worthy. Seriously.

- Juuchan17

November 08, 2008
Usa Female
Looking for one to take me in
This is your best fic yet. I really want it to be a movie! I'm sad tht this is your last work here on BS. Maybe one day you can write one more, maybe, when your life gets less hectic. But who am I to pressure you into doing that? Just consider...




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