with a smile.
"Hi, whats your name?" Said MagnumWolf.
"Adam." Adam said with a calm voice.
"I'm MagnumWolf."
"I'm Soundwave."
"Im Shockwave."
"Nice to meet you, lovely ladies." Adam said with happyness.
The three girls giggled and then Shockwave said "Theres someone here to see you." Aleu walked towards Adam with a big smile.
"Well leave you two alone." Said MagnumWolf as she, Shockwave and Soundwave left the room and closed the door.
"Adam, I'm so happy. I was afraid that I'd never see you again."
"Same here Aleu."
"Guess what Adam?"
"What?'
"I'm pregnat!" Aleu said with tears of joy.
"I'm gonna be a papa." Adam said with exitment.
"And I'm gonna be a mama." Said Aleu.
Aleu and Adam layed with eachother in the bed. Adam layed his head into the chest of his pregnat mate. They fell asleep with smiles on their faces. The others came in to say hello to Adam, but they went out because they finaly knew how close Adam and Aleu were.
Jenna then said "There so cute, together."
Dusty said after that "I smell pups."
"Yes." Dusty and Jenna cheered in unison.
The End
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Really rushed. Starfire's right, Aleu jumps into it a little too
quickly to be believable. So does Adam. And then there's the fact that
Aleu knew so quickly about her, ah, condition. Human mothers don't
tend to know until a month, which for a dog would translate into a
week. You have some good stuff here, but you have to "think fourth-dimensionally," as Doc Brown would say. |
