I second Kelev's idea, it was kind of hard to read. On the other hand, it was... very creative. You took a bit of excessive license with Toby and Luna's relationship, though, inasmuch as Toby was pretty darn hen-pecked in that story. Really, he takes a few playful jabs from Luna, but he definitely "wears the pants" in the family.

Well done a few words to describe would be....HILARIOUS umm FANTASTIC
AWESOME dont know no more

Maybe you should enlist a beta reader for some help with your
spelling and grammer... I could hardly read the fic, to tell the
truth.