Awesome fanfic! Can't wait for the second one!!

Yes I'm trying my best with my cousin's help to make the second part
the best it can get.

Way to go!

I'm very happy that you've enjoyed it! Hopefully the second part will
be up soon. Thank you everyone for reading it

This was amazing! While it was short, it was very interesting, and
kept me entertained the entire time. I'm looking forward to reading
the next part!

That was really great! I can't wait for the next one! *faves*

Can't wait for the 2nd part. You're in my faves.

A nice start to an interestingly popular concept in wolf society. I
like Sparkle's personality - she's stubborn yet the next in line . . .
but she has to find that perfect guy in order to hold her birthright
. . . So much drama, yet it's so short!

My suggestion: If
the story were longer, then perhaps the reader would clearly
understand the severity of Sparkle's situation. That's just me, of
course, but it's still a great story.

Keep it up!

- Juuchan17

Very good so far. THere's a lot you could have done with this one, but
then there's a lot you could do with future ones. I eagerly awit the
next installment.