No, Balto died!!! , i'm just kidding. That was very good, sure
some grammer mistakes here and there but besides that the story itself
was superb. You have potential, you can be one rockin' author in the
future.

A little to quick, spelled Aleu wrong, and Balto dieing wasn't my
favorite parts of the story. But I will tell you this; I enjoyed
reading the Aleu's Surprise! I liked the plot where Aniu comes in and
tells Aleu about the visions in the begining. Also, I thought Rosie's
dad started to like Balto after the end of Balto One. But anyways,
keep writing and improving. You have a talent.