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| June 28, 2008 | ||
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It would have been better if Kodi and Dusty's relationship had been designated as something beyond boyfriend/girlfriend. "Mates" or "spouses" would have worked well, and either one would do since they're anthropomorphic. I can see it would have messed up some of the dialogue with the team, but I personally think it would have been better that way. In all other respects, it was pretty good. |