strange presence nearby . . . and it was coming from the other side of the tunnel.
“Are you ready, my Son?” Aniu turned back to him and asked.
I . . . I am, I think . . .The hybrid responded back, taking careful steps towards his destination. He was unsure about things here, but he trusted Aniu and had a feeling that she would not allow anything to happen to him in this strange place. He cleared his throat once he paused at first gateway, turning back to the spirit. Yes, Aniu; I am ready.
With a nod of her elegant head, the ivory lupine watched with unmoving gaze as the grizzly-haired wolf-dog stepped into the shadowy darkness where someone awaited him.
(Part I – finished 8/16/07)
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| December 14, 2007 | ||
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Good start! I'm wanting more. Just reading this, you've given a good idea for one of my stories. I really liked this. Keep writing! |
![]() | February 24, 2008 | |
This was...interesting. Heh heh. I enjoyed many elements of
it...I just didn't much care for Aniu being able to actually draw the life from Balto in order to take him into the afterlife (hope that wasn't a spoiler for anyone reading this, or intending to read the story!). Still, you have a good working foundation here for its follow-up. Nice! |