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| December 14, 2007 | ||
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Good start! I'm wanting more. Just reading this, you've given a good idea for one of my stories. I really liked this. Keep writing! |
![]() | February 24, 2008 | |
This was...interesting. Heh heh. I enjoyed many elements of
it...I just didn't much care for Aniu being able to actually draw the life from Balto in order to take him into the afterlife (hope that wasn't a spoiler for anyone reading this, or intending to read the story!). Still, you have a good working foundation here for its follow-up. Nice! |