Hmm, nice story on this one. I like how you managed to make
the events there natural. Should've been rated R, though.
Good read, nonetheless. Not my preferred type of fanfiction,
but still good.
Wow, I'd give you a Nobel Prize for this one. You really
made a great approach on the subject, and showed how
the
intolerance hurts. I must admit I got aprehensive
in some
parts, and I almost cried in the end. Keep it
up.
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ewolf
one of your best, Cat ^^ And one of the site's best.
EDIT: I saw that the comments were deleted, so I erased my other stuff.
The
Guardian
the events there natural. Should've been rated R, though.
Good read, nonetheless. Not my preferred type of fanfiction,
but still good.
biznitch
but it is very realistic. I still like it!
ola
have lived... it would have been more intresting
dwolf93
made a great approach on the subject, and showed how
the
intolerance hurts. I must admit I got aprehensive
in some
parts, and I almost cried in the end. Keep it
up.
alph
know what they looked like puhleeeeze?!?
Do more.
Keep up the good work.
Wolf
{Star}
job
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