This sounds very much like "Inu mo arukeba" in whch the
stray dog Kuro falls in love with human Ukyo. And transforms
into a human after they start living together. Also
Guru-Guru Pon-chan, in which a special bone turns Ponta into
a human so she can romance Mirai the human neighbor boy. Or
even that special Sailor Moon movie in which Luna becomes
human because she fell for one.

In all, you're
part of a small, elite company of works. And I adore all of
them. Very few people can do zoophilia with grace, tact and
propriety.

You're fantastic.

That's such a touching story.

This one was really good; you don't see this concept much.
Really well written too. Way to go! Keep up the awesome,
awesome work!

I liked it. There are a few mistakes that stand out like the
occasional spelling error, but honestly the biggest gap I
found was the plot line. I can't help but feel you could
have done more with the idea of Gus turning human for awhile
and I still get this odd feeling when I look over the
concept of Aniu coming to grant Gus the transformation
thing. The story just takes an awkward dive. Gus being
kissed at first and feeling what he felt wasn't a big
surprise. Any dog, cartoon or realistically will feel some
sort of attachment to a source of affection like that. So,
the story seemed really average after a page and a half.
Then the Iron scene comes (I like that pun by the way). Iron
literally bashes Gus for being… like a normal dog and treats
him like this is some huge thing when really it's not all
that big. Then Gus being confused by all of that helped iron
out the drama that was just poured onto him, but then Aniu
sort of comes out of nowhere and grants him this
supernatural wish over something as normal as rain fall
(Loving a human) and then the story ends after a bit more
drama. To sum up my criticism you did a good job of making a
story of what happens when a canine who loves a human gets
his wish, but the way the drama was piled on makes it seem
like there was something more to be desired. And yeah, I'm
aware you made this in an hour; just use this as a reference
when you make a fan fiction with more time. Good job all the
same.

This fanfic was really, really good! It deserves an award,
and a sequal!

Aww you should make a sequel (not that i have ANY clue what
it would be like)! If you do I'll be happy!

Aww so sweet :] I enjoyed this one and started to wonder if
Dogs actually do fall in love with us humans XD

Finally a story about zoophilia (ups, did I said it out
loud?)

That was cute!

I loved this fic!;D It was well written. Aw, poor Gus. D: Oh
well, at least he gets to be with that girl as a dog.:>