I think it was to eat her?

that was pretty good for being written in only an hour

Awesome fic!

Thanks everyone ^^

I've greatly anticipated this story since you first pitched the idea
out in the forums, and you have not disappointed me. For being
written in an hour, this story is very good, at least to me. The way
Bran went insane from being lost in the jungle and the extreme heat
reminded me of "To build a Fire", a short story by Jack London, except
it happened in freezing cold temperatures. A good short story, if you
haven't read it. Anyway, I enjoyed reading your story and hope to see
more from you soon.

good fic wish it didn't have to be so short.

Aww... that was so sad! But good

This fic was nice, and it wasn't what I was expecting, poor Dinah, now
she'll wave to live with the Cheetas, I ca't imagine that XD, anywy
for a one-hour fic it was pretty nice

Oh very nice, I like the way you wrote it from Dinah's point of view so you
get to feel / understand what she's thinking, feeling etc: I only wish
it didn't end because I would love to see more!
Any way great work and an awesome original plot that was an enjoyable read (with cheetahs YAY!).

Thanks everyone