Sparkle In Your Eyes - Part I

Author : Juuchan17

Date sent : February 09, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Reminiscing the past . . . Valentine's Day is only a week away, and as Balto and Jenna remember the days and weeks when they were young and new to love, they decide to celebrate . . . What gift could a half-wolf mutt give a beautiful purebred husky to show how much she means to him? (Part 1 of 3 - a one-shot holiday fic)

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Sparkle In Your Eyes - Part I
By Juuchan17

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February 15, 2008
Suggestion for part 2...hmm. How about mixing a bit of rediculous
humor into it? Like when Balto's looking for the gift(s) he could ask
advice from various sources (Dixie and Silvie would be really funny in
a situation like that. ) Then he would wind up with so many silly
things that he doesn't know what to do about it.

Guest
Guest
February 24, 2008
Wonderful beginning! You captured the personalities of the characters
nicely...something most writers cannot do (especially here on Balto
Source, or elsewhere in the fan community). Good writing structure
too!

It's a poignant little story, and quite enjoyable.
I have already begun reading Part 2, and will comment once done!


February 10, 2008
Usa Male
Belle's Ice River pack
Yayz! You did a great job on the background story and the conflict
development. This is such a wonderful little story. Can't wait for the
next part. Cheers!

February 18, 2008
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
*Kyaaa* Thanks for naming "Sparkle in Your Eyes" as Fanfiction of the
week! I'm so glad you guys like it so far! The next part is almost
finished, so look for it within the next couple of days!

Kelev: Thanks for the idea! I read your comment and I used it. I'll
give you credit, okay? (It actually fit pretty well with the
situation!)

- Juuchan17

February 18, 2008
Uk Female
Lovely read! Can't wait for part 2!

February 18, 2008
Usa Male
Kelev might have something there. And this is a good story. Very
sweet, very well-written. Thumbs up!

February 18, 2008
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
UPDATE: Actually, I finished the next part of "Sparkle", so be sure to
check it out! It's longer and a bit more . . . awkward in my opinion,
but I think it'll all work out once the final part is completed!

- Juuchan17

Guest
Guest
February 23, 2008
Even some of the best professional romance novel writers could learn something from this.


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