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| September 21, 2007 | ||
Very nice! I really like this, Aleu isn't a brat in the way you made her to be. I can't wait for the next part! |
| September 16, 2007 | ||
Ok, so let me get this straight, you're writing fics like these for all of the pups as if they were the only survivors like Aleu? Or did I read something wrong? XD Either way, its a good story. I like your Aleu better, she's not annoying. |
![]() | September 16, 2007 | |
Are you writing a rewrite of Wolf Quest?Because if you are I'm glad because this is WAY better than the movie *snarls madly as she thinks about it* |
| September 16, 2007 | ||
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Yeah I like Aleu better in this than in the movie. Once again you moved me. I actually cried during Ebony's teasing towards Aleu. Hey, I felt sorry for her. I kinda know how she feels. Anyway keep up the good work! |
. . . especially thinking of six different storylines for
six totally different pups. Glad you like the new Aleu; I
wanted to make her not as annoying, but still a playful
yearling.
Brown Wolf: Yeah, Ebony's a rough
character . . . is she as rough as her father, Steele? I
hope she's better, actually! I made her especially for this
fic, and it was difficult to write insults for her to say to
Aleu and still have her be such a dominant figure in that
certain turning point. I'm glad I moved you with my words,
and I used my own personal experience to help inspire Aleu's
run-in with Ebony's gang. It doesn't feel so good to be
picked on, so why not show how someone feels? I guess it
worked!
Icebelly: No, this isn't a rewrite of
WQ (I actually enjoyed it, unlike most other people, but
meh), but it's still a life-changing experience for our
lovable half-breed.
Goodness, thanks for all
your support on Aleu's Tale! One more part left to go for
her, and then it on to Denali's tale (aka the white-nuzzled
one that Cat calls "Kiona" . . . except it's a boy)!
- Juuchan17