Toby: The Beginning

Author : PoliceDog

Date sent : June 29, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : An untimely death, a grieving widow, and a policedog on a mission to solve a series of unexplained crimes. And he'd better do it quick, because if he doesn't the whole town of Nome may be lost. This is where the Toby series all began...

Length : Long -

Characters :
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Toby: The Beginning
By PoliceDog

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September 04, 2008
Usa Male
Balto Friend --> Thank you for reading.
emma --> Kelev pretty
much took this one for me.

September 03, 2008
Usa Female
that story was AWSOME!!!!!! i hope you write another one!

August 30, 2008
Usa Male
Well, I guess that covers how it happened. Great story.

August 10, 2008
Usa Female
Let me be your everlasting light
Nice you guys ;D

August 09, 2008
Usa Male
legacy --> What can I say, I'm a sucker for irony. And thanks, I'm
glad you enjoyed it.

July 10, 2008
Australia Female
Isn't that right, Toby?

Hahaha!

This was
great! I do prefer the actual Toby series, but this was still awesome!

July 05, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
That was great! I liked the epilogue!

July 05, 2008
Usa Male
canines --> Thank you, we appreciate it.

July 05, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
wow i never would have guessed anything that happened in this i knew
pete would be stuck up since his dad died. anyway
....BRILLIANT....AWESOME......GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

Guest
Guest
July 03, 2008
Hey, good job on the story guys! Really good read.

July 02, 2008
Australia Female
no u
Nothing you could have written, ah you sneaky thing DT |D really good
read though, keep up the good work both of you :3

July 02, 2008
Uk Male
I finished reading the story, I thought it was great, thumbs up for
Dragz and Kelev.

P.S. Dragz: I can't PM at the moment,
i've got a 'Bug', so i cannot PM you for the time being.... Sorry.

July 02, 2008
Usa Male
Krazy --> Yeah, Rex didn't get a whole lot of page space in the other
stories and was, admittedly, little more than an extra in the past. I
really had fun exploring Rex and making him the hero instead of just
the dad. And I understand your changed view of Pete entirely- I myself
pity people like him, who have such a skewed grasp of right and wrong
that they see what is right as wrong while viewing what is twisted as
justified. But don't hold your breath about him beating the living
daylights out of Toby.
kelev --> I certainly am pleased to hear
it. Thanks Walto!

June 30, 2008
Usa Male
G'Reth --> Lol One post, please. And the text was like that because
the bold parts were by me and the normal parts were by kelev.

June 30, 2008
Female
AMAZING!!!! I LOVED IT! It was wonderful, well writen and just plain
awesome!!!
I have a question though. Why was part
of it in bold and part in regular?

June 30, 2008
Female
Sorry, that was an accident. thanks for answering my quetion. I really
loved it.

June 29, 2008
Usa Female
Where's da lemon?
That Was Amazing!!! Now i get why Petes the way he is, poor guy..

June 29, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
I'm working on it right now. So far, it is FANTASTIC!!!

June 30, 2008
Usa Female
Two words: AWESOME STORY!!

July 01, 2008
Usa Male
Baltorocks --> Oh. Well, sorry.

Guest
Guest
July 01, 2008
Heh, took me awhile to finally get time to post what I thought. Lol
But I thought it was very well written. I can tell that you two put in
you hardest effort to get it to the level that it is. I admit that
some things may have been a little foggy, but I saw a good balence and
flow in this. Keep writing you guys! :D

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