Description : An untimely death, a grieving widow, and a policedog on a mission to solve a series of unexplained crimes. And he'd better do it quick, because if he doesn't the whole town of Nome may be lost.
This is where the Toby series all began...
wow i never would have guessed anything that happened in this i
knew
pete would be stuck up since his dad died. anyway
....BRILLIANT....AWESOME......GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
Guest
July 03, 2008
Hey, good job on the story guys! Really good read.
Krazy --> Yeah, Rex didn't get a whole lot of page space in the
other
stories and was, admittedly, little more than an extra in the past.
I
really had fun exploring Rex and making him the hero instead of
just
the dad. And I understand your changed view of Pete entirely- I
myself
pity people like him, who have such a skewed grasp of right and
wrong
that they see what is right as wrong while viewing what is twisted
as
justified. But don't hold your breath about him beating the living
daylights out of Toby.
kelev --> I certainly am pleased to
hear
it. Thanks Walto!
AMAZING!!!! I LOVED IT! It was wonderful, well writen and just
plain
awesome!!!
I have a question though. Why was part
of it in bold and part in regular?
Heh, took me awhile to finally get time to post what I thought. Lol
But I thought it was very well written. I can tell that you two put
in
you hardest effort to get it to the level that it is. I admit that
some things may have been a little foggy, but I saw a good balence
and
flow in this. Keep writing you guys! :D
Comments
Razor
emma --> Kelev pretty
much took this one for me.
Dreamer
Razor
glad you enjoyed it.
gma
Hahaha!
This was
great! I do prefer the actual Toby series, but this was still awesome!
Razor
pete would be stuck up since his dad died. anyway
....BRILLIANT....AWESOME......GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
read though, keep up the good work both of you :3
Dragz and Kelev.
P.S. Dragz: I can't PM at the moment,
i've got a 'Bug', so i cannot PM you for the time being.... Sorry.
Razor
stories and was, admittedly, little more than an extra in the past. I
really had fun exploring Rex and making him the hero instead of just
the dad. And I understand your changed view of Pete entirely- I myself
pity people like him, who have such a skewed grasp of right and wrong
that they see what is right as wrong while viewing what is twisted as
justified. But don't hold your breath about him beating the living
daylights out of Toby.
kelev --> I certainly am pleased to hear
it. Thanks Walto!
Razor
the bold parts were by me and the normal parts were by kelev.
awesome!!!
I have a question though. Why was part
of it in bold and part in regular?
loved it.
a
3
Razor
But I thought it was very well written. I can tell that you two put in
you hardest effort to get it to the level that it is. I admit that
some things may have been a little foggy, but I saw a good balence and
flow in this. Keep writing you guys! :D
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