Well, thank you both. Blackjack, send me some of your material; perhaps I can help.

Wow! Bloody good job, mate. Now I understand the moral of the story of Dragon Tamer's Toby series a lot better. You might not believe this, but I read ALL of Dragon Tamer's Toby stories before reading this. It helps for me now that I know where it all started. The Toby series has been one of my all time favourite reads out of most stories that I have read in my lifetime. It is a wonderful long story based on a life filled with discovery, adventure, danger, bravery, destiny, loyalty, emotions, drama, and love and family. I think that with all these themes fitting into one; it really creates the vibe of a true masterpiece of novelty.

I also love the way that you write. You have such professionalism in the language that you present it in along with the feelings and emotions of the characters. That also creates a great story. You should get a promotion, mate. Really, you are just THAT good a novelist. I wish that I knew how to bring out my own stories in such professional standards.

8.5/10 and 4 1/2 stars from me. Excellent job, mate. Keep up the great work.

loved it . now i have to read toby's story

Angel --> On behalf of myself and Kelev, thank you.

Very good story, few or no errors, good humour, Five halos from the Angel.

Alkila --> Thanks! I'm not sure what else we might do, but you can always take a look at our individual works if you haven't already.

Great story! You two did a spectacular job with this; I'd LOVE to see more from you two!*FAVES*

Talking about Orde... What TYPE of English accent(sp?) are you talking about, there are loaaaaaaaaaaaaaads of different ones:
Cockney
Queen
Northern
Southern
Welsh
Scottish
Irish
Scouser
Eastern (Like a Norwich one)
and loads others.

So this is how it all started. It's amazing how well thought through
this fanfic was. I have read stories from the galleries of both of you
and this is just as good as anything else in either of them. I will be
waiting for another from the two of you. Keep up the good work!

Rocks --> You'll have to ask Kelev about that, although I always figured he had a british accent (would that be "Queen"?).