The Brown Hill Spirits (part 8)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : December 29, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : Humans have returned to Achak's and Kiona's territory. But only one newcomer knows where they are. Are these humans here for Hokee? Or do they have other things in mind? (We apologize for the short length of the fic.)

Length : Short -

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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 8)
By dragonkitty411

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March 27, 2008
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
Short, sweet and simple . . . I liked it! I can't wait to see what
adventures you guys will think up next!

BTW, I love the
realism to your main epic. It follows the lifestyles of wolves, but
also has that sense of personification in it as well. Please keep it
up!

- Juuchan17

December 30, 2007
Global Moderator Usa Female
Good chapter. A little short but that's okay. Good to see
Zepher appear and it seems Nayeli will have yet another new
friend. She should take to Zepher as easily as she did
Hokee. Nice to know that the humans didn't want any troube,
only to check on Dartanion. Nicely done. I look forward to
Part 9

December 31, 2007
Usa Female
Senior Mod
Thanks Brown! ^^ Feathers--> what?

Guest
Guest
December 29, 2007
YAH! First one to comment on the new fanfic! Anyways,
AWESOME job! Keep up the good work!

December 29, 2007
Usa Female
What I've read so far is awesome ^^ If I weren't feeling so
sick, I'd read the rest of it Dx

Guest
Guest
December 29, 2007
Great Job!

January 05, 2008
Usa Female
Senior Mod
Glad to hear Lol

December 30, 2007
Thanks everyone! Part 9'll be like 10 times greater than the
8th chapter so sit tight




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