Aleu's world

In my lfe people run away from me,

And I can't see why after all im just a husky-wolf,

When I was young I saw all my siblings get home,

Dingo,Kodi,Saba,Venus and finally Phoebe,

All get a home but I didn't, 

I cried myself to sleep that night,

Kodi  got a job as a mail-dog,

So did Dingo and Venus,

Just Saba and Phoebe became show dogs.

 

Only  Venus and Phoebe are mine.

Please ask to use them do not steal!!!

 



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June 03, 2009
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
Thanks everyone!

September 28, 2008
Uk Female
amazing! way cool hope to see more poems from you!

September 03, 2008
Usa Female
i wasn't crazy about this one but it was still good. keep it up!!!

Guest
Guest
September 01, 2008
Rhyming needs some work, but not bad otherwise. *favs*

August 30, 2008
Usa Female
Small but Determined
It was good, but next time try to make it longer and try to make it
ryme.

Guest
Guest
August 27, 2008
A bit too short though, but I really enjoyed it ^^ It explained Aleu's
feelings very well in those few words. Keep jobbing ;-)

Guest
Guest
August 23, 2008
ok.it was alright but try and get it to rhyme

Guest
Guest
July 28, 2008
brilliant!!

Guest
Guest
July 13, 2008
nice!

Guest
Guest
July 10, 2008
its ok but it doesn't ryme

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