Aleu's world

Author : Icefire

Date sent : July 03, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Poem

Description : A quick poem about the day of adoptian in Aleu's point of veiw. Does not rhyme.

Length : Very short -

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Aleu's world

By Icefire

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Icefire	June 03, 2009

	Silvermoon family

Thanks everyone!


Cheeky_m onkey	September 28, 2008

amazing! way cool hope to see more poems from you!


Emmajudy	September 03, 2008

i wasn't crazy about this one but it was still good. keep it up!!!


Guest	September 01, 2008

Rhyming needs some work, but not bad otherwise. *favs*


Paxis	August 30, 2008

	Small but Determined

It was good, but next time try to make it longer and try to make it
ryme.


Guest	August 27, 2008

A bit too short though, but I really enjoyed it ^^ It explained Aleu's
feelings very well in those few words. Keep jobbing ;-)


Guest	August 23, 2008

ok.it was alright but try and get it to rhyme


Guest	July 28, 2008

brilliant!!


Guest	July 13, 2008

nice!


Guest	July 10, 2008

its ok but it doesn't ryme

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