I just have to say that I love this piece.
You seem to have a talent for making words visual, and making it like a film. This story was short, sweet and to the poiint, which is what appeals to mii very much so.
What I don't enjoii, though, is that you cut it off without even saiing if you were making a sequel or anything. Hope you continue!

Spectacular job, Cat! i could really visualize and see this played out in my head; you have a knack with words!

Ah. As I said, forgive me for reading into it. The context of comparing it to a U.S. soldier right in the intro kind of led to that conclusion. As it pertains to dogs, I quite agree. Dog fighting is... agh, it's just beyond words (although this comes pretty close). Nice to see you lending your skill to a good cause.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. But it wasn't intended to be anti-military at all (tho there are a few soldiers who think like this, I'm sure). It was pro-pitbull terrier.

I have to say, this is considerably better than I've come to expect based on some of your other writing. You did an impressive job of putting emotion into your words. And as it relates to the military, it gives a deeply impacting perspective.
But if you were trying to convince your readers of an anti-military view (forgive me if I read into it too much, but you did talk about depth as I recall), you haven't succeeded on my part.

I really liked this story. If you turned it into a series, or just another fic, I'd read and reccomend. As usual.

thanks

I loved it Cat i have to say this was pretty good ^^

This is awesome!

Well I definitely liked it. I feel sorry for General, and even more so for the last dog her killed. Dog fighting is one of my most despised acts of cruelty. I liked this story- it was pretty deep.