“Why did you have to do that!” she asked angrily between laps. “We could have both gotten away!”

“I’m fine!” I repeated pushing her away. “I just have to walk it off”

I picked myself up and shook off. Splattering Kaya and Ataneq with water and slobber.

“Sorry”

I started walking.          “See! Fine!”        

I took two more steps and collapsed.

Boss cackled from his side of the creek.

            “Get him on my back!” Ataneq ordered.

“I’m ….okay…..still….just a ….scratch”

I slipped in and out of consciousness, seeing bits and pieces of my territory as it started to snow. I saw a glimpse of Aniu through the snow. She winked and disappeared. I hadn’t given up yet. Everything went black, then I opened my eyes and we were back in the cave again.

“I can't breathe…” I managed.

             Kaya started re- cleaning the wounds again and Ataneq watched me worriedly from the mouth of the den.

“I saw Aniu. What does that mean” I breathed.

            “Then the answer is simple. Don’t give up and you won’t die” Kaya tried to joke, but I could hear the worry in her voice.

            “Just stay awake, okay?"

“Sure, but no promises”

The cave started to disappear in a storm of dots.

            “Buck?! Keep breathing"

I couldn’t answer her. Everything was going black. Balto was going to be the only one to survive in our family…

            “Buck!! No!!!”

“Sorry” I managed one last time.

 

Ataneq, Buck and Kaya (c) me

Boss (c) Tadie

Aniu (c) Universal



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March 05, 2011
Usa Male
awesome story!

October 05, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
thanks spirit :D

Guest
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September 27, 2009
AWESOME

June 03, 2009
Uk
Alpha male of the Unalaq Pack
Oh my god! what happened??!!?
oh yeah, all the sequels are outlol

March 25, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
XD yep!

March 25, 2009
Usa Male
Interesting.... Fights do tend to do that. They have a real dramatic effect.

August 05, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
XD! i hope you like the others!




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