Toby Part One: Hero Worship

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : February 07, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Toby wants to be a wolf-dog just like his hero, Balto. But when his friend is in trouble, Toby will have to face the odds and his own limitations to discover his hidden potential. This takes place after redwolf03's "Second Chance" series, which is now finished. It may make more sense if you read "A Second Chance: Copper," and "Finale: One Last Chance" first.

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Toby Part One: Hero Worship
By Jake Razor

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February 07, 2007
GAA! Continue with this! You are a GREAT author! Better then
me at any rate... I can't wait for the next part.

February 08, 2007
Usa Female
That was one of the best stories I've ever read! I loved
your characters, and you used my characters just the way I
wanted them to be used! But now, I'll have to change how
Steele interacts with Chase and Copper in the last part of
the A Second Chance series, but it's not a big deal...Write
on, Dragon Tamer! You're an amazing author!

February 08, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks. I'll keep working on it. Glad you like them so
much.

February 11, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks again. It's good to know I'm doing a good job. I'll
try not to keep you guys hanging on the next part.

February 10, 2007
Usa Male
WOW! Got more hooked like fish on a fishing hook!

February 12, 2007
Female
I can't wait for the rest of the series

February 13, 2007
Usa Female
I LIKE IT!!!!!

Guest
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February 16, 2007
it is the awsomest (well one) stories i have read howls to
you

February 21, 2007
Usa Male
Aw, shucks. Thanks, guys! I hate to
keep fans waiting, so I'll try to have the next part done as
soon as possible. I appreciate your patience.

February 23, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks for the complement. I hope I won't have to keep you
waiting much longer for the next part. I just have to make
a few more adjustments and it's showtime.
By the way, any ideas from anyone about stuff that could happen in a Toby story? I'm not short on ideas at the moment, but if there are any requests I'll see what I can do.

March 04, 2007
Usa Female
Dorkish O_o
i like that one kepp writting!

October 29, 2008
Usa Male
Thanks. I hope you like the others too.

May 07, 2007
Female
SWEET!

June 20, 2007
Female
well, i noticed that it has a GREAT message about
friendship. and that Taya is part chow! I LOVE CHOWS!!!!

June 20, 2007
Female
this was my second read and i noticed things that i didn't
notice last time.

June 21, 2007
Usa Male
Glad you noticed. Actually, Taya isn't really my character. She's redwolf03's.

June 23, 2007
Female
Well, again, GREAT work! Have you ever thought about doing
a story about Toby's parents?

June 23, 2007
Female
I can't believe it! How do you write so well? i agree with
saphire_saphirilla.

June 23, 2007
Female
You are in the top 10 with both this and Pup Problems!!
Great job!

June 23, 2007
Female
Sounds good! Can't wait! :cool:

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
These are awesome stories..... got any hints for me to be
better?

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
I'm going to fill up the page with me..... just like I did
to wolfcall! Plus, I'm bored

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
yyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh................
BORING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
Yeah not the story, I'm merly stating the fact that I AM
BORED!!!!!!

October 29, 2008
Australia Female
hay i read toby part one it was great

July 28, 2007
Usa Male
Hey, Dragon Tamer. I'm a new user, so I'm going through
your fanfics from the beginning. Nice ending on that one.
One thing, though. With this part: “It seems our little
Houdini has disappeared. Again.”, you could have made it
"Hairy Houdini" as a sort of joke. All in all, nice job.

September 05, 2007
Usa Male
Oh, I gotcha. Thanks, it's good to know I'm making
characters that are easy to relate to.

September 05, 2007
Uk Female
when Toby was confused about Luna I was too

August 09, 2007
Usa Female
Love the book but that cliff hanger is just TERRIBLE! And I
meant EVIL! Keep writing these are great books and time for
the next one! You're in my favorites!

August 09, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks for the complement. It sounds like
you've only read the first one, so feel free to check out
the rest. The next one should fill in the cliffhanger

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