Balto-kodiak --> Thank you very much.

Dragon Tamer - The story of Toby and Luna has touched me and i've only read the first one. I give you FIVE STARS on your now i go read the next one!

Taco --> Glad you liked it.

Awesome fanfic, even better the second time I read it, very skillfully written.
My mission: Comment on all of Dragon tamers fanfics. Go!

Just --> Good.

oh, okay now it makes sense.

Just --> Correction: It loked like he died. If you re-read it, it implies he survived.

DT --> but Steele gets Killed in "Finale: One last chance", so how does he show up here?

St4rr --> He was, apparently. Evidently I, and my writing predecessor, were misinformed. But after all I had written by the time I found out, it didn't make sense to go back and re-write everything.

Blackjack --> Thanks. Whenever I base one story on another, I try to be as faithful as I can to the original work.
Just --> Exactly.
Angel --> Thanks.

Wait, is this supposed to be what happens after "Finale: one last chance?"

This is a very impressive start. You write very much like redwolf03. Reading this story makes me think how suspensful the next ones are going to be. I know that there are some big events to come in the following stories after reading this. I do like the way you have followed on from and related to the original story from redwolf03. I am looking forward to reading the next one.

Elise --> Sometimes I think I could have, but thank you very much.

Great one. I just had time to start reading your fics now the school
tests are over, and i really like what i see. can't wait to see the
other ones.

Wolf --> Thanks, although I think it's a site glitch. Most of those
fics haven't gotten any comments in awhile.
halfblood --> Thank
you. I hope you continue to enjoy them.

Love it doll-face, moving on to next part.

As i told you before, the event with Luna and the boxes in the
begining was unexpected, but i liked it =] However (if you don't mind
my criticism) after that the rest of the story seemed a bit rushed.
There was a lot of dialogue, which i enjoyed, but not too much detail.
It was a bit difficult for me to picture a few of this situations,
although, i am obsessed with detail so i don't know. :B
I do
want to find out what happens next though, so you'll probably see more
comments from me on the other parts =]
Awesome job overall.

Sam --> Thank you. Yes, I noticed that my style is largely
dialogue-oriented, which I really ought to work on. I'll keep that in
mind.

My pleasure, Nova.

Very good

i really love how you characterize Toby. he's a very likeable
character. im going to continue reading this and your other stuff.
great work! :D

marble --> Thank you. I look forward to your feedback.

Wow! You had me leaning forward in my chair the entire time!

Wow, that was really good, can't wait to read the rest of the Tobys.

Great fanfic! I thought Steele was a husky not a malamute

Great one! I love Toby and Luna! you wrote everything so well! Just
outstanding work! :D I like how Toby's friend is related to Steele and
Balto,making toby have a complicated problem on how he will judge Luna
at first. Again,great work!

Whoa.... this story just blew me away.... !!!

Stormer --> High praise indeed, from one of your name.

amazing u could not have done a better job

Very well writtan.I Injoyed it.