heyya this is really cool i read Draco's story too its also cool ^^ i cant wait to get on this site and show Skye to the world XD

really good fan fic!

amazing....

great story

that was exellent! VERY NICE STORY

Amazing story Cat!

a good fanfic

havnt blinked since i started! that was good!

Awesome

this was really good, your very talented.

I LOVED it! :innocengrin:

great job cat

i loved it

I loved the story it was exellent!!!

Wow. Amazing story! I was wondering when u would do a Kiona fanfic. Anyways very nice work Cat! I await to see if u shall do anymore.

asome cat! i love it!

I liked it, but you could have been more descriptive, and there were many grammatical errors... Good job, though!

THAT WAS AWESOME! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg thats cool write more XD i like it.

thats so cool!
write more,write more, write more!

Wow... I never realized that poor Kiona had to go through all that. And did Fox die? VERY good story, I gotta try that!! Are you going to write more about Kiona? I hope so, she is an amazing character!!!!

Whoo-hoo! Nice, I still like it. Hopefully i'll have mine up soon

YOU RULE AT WRITING AND DRAWING!!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE ABOUT KIONA!!! Ok, ok, I'm cool now. My favorite character is Kiona (of course) Who is your fav?

This fic is very good. It explains a lot of things.

kelev --> Kiona was basically "afraid" of, or rather "distant" from Balto because there was something about him that seemed dangerous to her. That "dangerous something" was his wolf heritage. She was basically afriad of the future, like that dangerous part of him would rub off on her and make her do something she'd regret (for instance, biting Thomas) She didn't know why she was afraid of him, but she eventually found out, and considered her "dangerous side" a gift from her father (reason why she thanked him). And it is a gift, but it was a curse too, since she did go out of control when she attacked Fox. Mind you, she is still young and doesn't yet know how to control her viciousness. M.S.D.F --> I'm glad you liked my story, just keep in mind that I'm not going for "best story" or anything, I just wanted to bring my character to life, but right now I can only do it in words and doodles.

Read it but didn't fell asleep thought (happened with RTV) I can not say that its the best what I have read...but yet good with the others what I had read, keep going not giving up...

How come Kiona didn't like Balto? I would think if I had been her I'd LOVE to have him as a father.

No, Fox did not die. I probably should've mentioned that somewhere, but he was severely injured by Kiona's bites

OK... that is what I thought. Very interesting, you know about wolf aggression quite well.

That was great! It shows alot about wolf nature.