Loved it

I loved this fic! Nice bio about Kiona!

I love all of my characters

I don't have a fav.

I think this is great

Poor Kiona

I liked it...I just didn't like all the biting and fighting and aggression! It sounded like Kiona had a few mental/emotional issues, like Jade in Lone wolf's fanfic 'Blood Lust'!

If I write another fanfic about her, I just might make her mentally unstable for some of it I love stories and movies where the main character is mentally unstable. I think it's interesting

I luvvvur Fic and i luvvvKiona ur a great writer will u be addin more 2 The Wolf's Trail

Oya, here is my 2 cents. Good but bad. Kiona is stong but mental. She shoul dbe obedient, but firm and strong at the same time. And THomas, well he was really kind, but too getall angry all of the sudde is not the business. and there was too many violence. I ave seen your pictures of Dakota adn Dingo fighting. Your too violent and well, I dunno, a bit tackless. But i admire Kiona in a way. i like story though, it makes the readers stick to the stroy, it has suspense and good action. You are great writer. do write more. And I really dont try to sound mean. I togh you should know.

Please write more pleease!

Maybe her violentness is foreshadowing a mental illness that'll unfold entirely later in her life? You know? And believe me, there are plenty of men who would beat their dog if they were only biten. No matter how kind a person is, there's some kind of anger bubbling inside of them somewhere. And I don't like to see myself as violent, but more open to a little bit of reality in kids movies And the story really isn't as violent as it's depicted. Fox didn't die, he was just bitten numerous times (i admit that i should've stated that somewhere in there) But other than that, it's really not that different than Jack London's writing. I don't see where I'm tactless because everything was planned and definately relating to itself in my fic (may not be very descriptive [but how descriptive can a dog really be?] but there's plenty of foreshadowing) I'm not being mean, I'm just replying for the sake of pointing out what's going on in my head. But I'm glad that you liked it

That was an amazing story. I loved how the dogs had no dialogue, that effect added a touch of realism and originality to your story. Also, Kiona's character was very deep. Her wolf side obviously made her slightly mad, which is normal for wolf/dog hybrids. Kiona was a headstrong and natural leader, that's for sure! She had a dominance that she refused to give up. An amazing tale, I beg you to continue!

Well, good for you

I love your story WRITE MORE OR ELSE!!!

I love this story, Cat! And Fox just gets on my nerves! When Kiona attacked him, I was like, YOU GO GIRL!...Anyhoo, keep up the great Fanfic work! I really love the way you come up with things!

I actually liked the way Kiona was showing aggression like a wolf. It was almost like she could not control it! I guess she has more wolf inside than Balto!

I know, but in a way it seems so violent, but I love the way its written. its been seen from her point of view.

oh! this story i found very entertaining it was very good

The Wolf's Trail was a very good story Cat! I loved the way you explained Kiona's Life. It seemed that Kionna was talking from the first persons view. I enjoyed it alot.

sorry, but good fan fic

Write! WRITE LIKE THE WIND!!!!..... Please?

You people hafta understand that I leave some stuff out on purpose, so that I give you guys a chance to think what YOU thought happened to the characters. You can think whatever you want about Miksa, you can think that he died, you can think he didn't, I leave that up to you

Me too ^_^

I love your story, but its kida sad. I really hate it when the author leaves the story hanging.I know you do it on purpose, but I still hate. keep writng. Plzzz

Scratch the first one

WOW! you're an awsome writer!

I loved it! But in both of your fanfics, you use seen where you're supposed to use saw. My mom's an English teacher, so I get it from her. So anyway, I absolutely loved it! There could have been more, but I still loved it!

this is my fav fanfic i felt sorry for Kiona how she was treated by Fox but i liked it it was very enjoyable to read

very good don't stop writing