Toby Part Two: Steele's Return

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : March 03, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Steele is back, and he knows Taya's secret. Now it's up to Copper, Toby, and Luna to stop Steele and save Taya. But even they can't save her from the demons of her own past. Contains spoiler details from "Finale: One Last Chance" by redwolf03. Also refers to events in "A Second Chance: Copper," although these events are explained within the story.

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Toby Part Two: Steele's Return
By Jake Razor

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Guest
Guest
March 06, 2007
WOW. VERY, VERY, AWESOME!!!

March 28, 2007
Usa Male
To those who have read the Author's note in this story, I
have good news. The very Sunday after I posted it, my
friend turned up in church. It's been two weeks now and
I've been seeing her regularly at church events!
Hallelujah! (to anyone confused, feel free to read the story)

April 29, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
This is AWESOME! You come up with great plots! And Steele is still
malicious and calculating, which is hard to keep in-character in a
fanfic. Fantastic, really. (And by the way, please read my first
fanfic and tell me what you think of it!)

May 07, 2007
Female
POOR TAYA! IT WAS ASOME

June 23, 2007
Female
GREAT STORY!! I loved it when Pete tried to go east instead
of west!!!

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
STILL trying........................

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
Still trying to fill the page with me............

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
I'm such an idiot ...... AND BORED!!!!!

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
I am really really REALLY bored

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
I'm still trying to fill the page

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
STILL GOING AND STILL BORED!!!!

June 23, 2007
Usa Female
I DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I FILLED THE PAGE WITH
ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 25, 2007
Female
I love that Pete tried to go east instead of west! Great
story!

July 28, 2007
Usa Male
Great story, good example on how the main characters (except
Steele) handled the situation in the end. Deep message of
an afterthought.

Guest
Guest
October 20, 2007
Oh man! This was funny! I love it! Good job! It was
hilarious!

April 20, 2008
Brazil Male
I'm wordless. Ok, if i was, i wouldnt be saying this. Anyway, awesome
fic, very deep moral lesson, and i think you are right. I
inconsciously tried to get revenge from my dad through being cold to
him and pushing him away, but them i realized i was just making things
much worse, and it turned out that he needed my help more than ever.
Man, i cant wait to read your other fics. You are a great writer, and
though i dont know you very well, you are a very smart, open-minded
and kind person as few to no people i know are. Keep like that and
sorry for taking so much space in your comments page.

February 09, 2008
Usa Female
very good! yeah he was right Steele will be mad when he get's to new
york very good book took me three days to read it though

February 10, 2008
Usa Male
Aleu --> I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to stick with it. Did it raise
any new questions?

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