I'm glad to see Taya finally get some closure about her mother after Luka died before giving her any hints. I hope word reaches Ava about this new developement! Great job with Part 2 DT!

Taco --> Thanks again.
Croc --> Thank you. I have to say in terms of putting myself into the story, this one was the most personal I ever wrote. It's not much surprise people keep coming back to it.

Wow..... Just... Wow. There aren't many words that can describe this story besides Incredible. Characters that feel real, a story that never gets old, and once more a story that's ORIGINAL!! Nowadays people just copy what they see, but this is something that touched me very, VERY deeply. 10 out of 5 stars :D

Another great one, I'm not surprised though, you write really good fanfics!

Beachpup --> Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

i really like Toby part 2 and I appreciate the authors note at the end I can relate to it your a really good aurthor!!!!

St4rr --> They do their best.

Great job and so much 4 keeping a very close eye on carlson

*hugs* You act so innocent sometimes, You amaze me ashke in that these experiences do not taint you. They taint me in sorrow but to both of us I suppose it has taught us much.

On to part three.

Akila --> Thanks. I thought it best that the punishment fit the crime, but if I'd done that Steele would be dead.

I really liked this one! Steele got his just deserves, and I like the fact that he'll be going to NY where the statue of Balto is

Just --> No, I don't think so. But I suppose it's possible.

Do you think the dog that belongs to Rosie's grandaughter is related to steele in any way?

Balto --> If you want you can PM me about it. Maybe I can help.

I hate my "dad" as mutch as taya hated steele maybe more

halfblood --> Believe me, my friend, you have nothing to apologize
for. Making a difference for people, by one means or another, is the
heart and soul of why I'm on this site and always has been. To tell
you the truth, I've been having a bit of a rought time today. So thank
you for taking the time to give me such extensive feedback so I could
end my day on a good up-beat. *hugs*

Part one and two are excellent so far! I have been meaning to read the
Toby Series for a while now. That note at the end of Part 2 is really
powerful; I like how you wrote the story using events in real life.
Can't wait to read the rest of the series!

Wolf_girl --> Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, as it says in the author's
note I based it on true events because, as Toby quoted in Part 1,
stories are meant to be learned from. I wanted other people to learn
from past sufferings I ad witnessed in others or endured in myself, so
that they themselves would nt suffer the same fate.
I am pleased
that you enjoyed my work. Do come and comment again.

The last page is so inspirational. I'll never look at MY dad the same, ironic way again. Thank you, Dragon Tamer, for helping me realize that revenge could only bring you down to their level. I loved the story, and I loved the connection between this and real life. Once again, thank you for opening the eyes of so many, including me.

dragon tamer, your toby series is way better than what I am writing. oh by the way were you planning on making a toby 14? because if you were you should probably add a HUGE secret of a character!

P.S. I am a Christian too, and I'm glad you wrote that it is possible to be changed for the worse if you aren't firmly planted in God.

Wolf Paws --> Thank you for letting me know my story succeeded in teaching the desired lesson. It's hearing feedback like yours that really helps when I'm facing difficulties (don't worry, nothing serious at the moment. Just a college project). And you're right, although even those firmly rooted can mess up now and then - just look at David. It's like they say here at my college, "If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything."
Wolfelana --> Eventually, yes. But what do you mean "Secret of a character?"

I can just imagine all the dogs running after Carson!

Stormer --> Yeah.

This has always been one of my favorite fics in the Toby series, and also on BS as a whole. Well-written plot and dialogue, "round" characters and a well-done flashback are just a few of the things that make this a great fic. Kudos to you for making this fic!

Iditarod --> I'm glad my story was able to make such an impact on you. All in all, I think I put more of myself into Toby Part 2 than any other story. It's good to know that it was worth the investment.

i just read this one and i think it was cool!!!!!! as i said
keep!!writting!!

This was so good. I never realized Taya would have such a
strong connection to you, Dragon Tamer. This was a great
piece of writing. You do my series justice.

BRAVO! What a great story! I loved it and I think you
definatly out done yourself! (My favorite part was where
Toby's father mentioned Carson being arrested for stealing
clothes off a clothes line. LOL He got what he deserved...)

Thanks, guys. redwolf03, one of the marks of a good writer
is that their characters are easy to relate to, so again I guess that means you did a good job on her. Thanks again.
And Kelev, thanks for the comment. But next time see if you
can avoid too many spoiler details. I know I've been guilty
of that in the past, but let's not give away the ending for
anyone else. All the same, LOVE the feedback. And if you like to see the baddies get theirs, you'll enjoy what happens to Pete in the next story. You know the saying, "Be careful what you wish for?"