‘Alpha Aniu of the Spirit Pack.’ Came a voice as Aniu turned around and saw the Alpha Male of the Orion Pack and two of his body guards. Bowing slightly Aniu watched as he walked forwards and stood beside her. ‘Our quarrel has only brought death and destruction, many have been killed including my daughter Sora in our last battle at the border…I ask for a truce that both our packs may live in peace in the future, I do not want any more of my pack killed?’ Looking shocked Aniu quickly nodded.
‘Every since this war started I longed for it to end and I will do anything to bring peace to my pack.’ Aniu said looking after where her brother went.
Nodding the Alpha Male slowly began to turn around and walk away but before he was gone he stopped and turned to face her. ‘Please accept my forgiveness for what I have done and ask for you to promise me that no one will come on our land again….’
‘You have my word…’ Aniu said bowing slightly as the wolves disappeared in to the darkness. Suddenly from the trees a tiny little pup walked forward and ran up to Aniu and was whimpering. Smiling down at the small pup Aniu knew him from her pack and was glad to see he had survived. ‘Oh Nava, this is the dawning of a new future for the Spirit Pack.’ She looked out towards the distance tears sliding down her face as she wondered whether she would ever see her brother again, ‘but I fear for my brother. Life has been bad to him and I want to give him all he deserved but I fear that I am to late…’ Nava looked up at Aniu and looked out towards the distance.
Raiden laid down on a ledge and looked up to the moon, he was too sad to cry, to angry to do anything, it was as though everything he was, was being blown away. Slowly he closed his eyes and smiled as the memory of him and Aniu playing together under the watchful eye of his loving parents came back to him.
‘Mum, dad lets make sure we never become distance from each other...’ Puppy Raiden said smiling as his mother nuzzled him his tail wagging behind him.
‘Yes mum lets be a family forever nothing will ever make us separate.’ Aniu said walking and sitting down beside her father.
'As long as I'm here nothing will ever hurt either of you.' Raiden's mother said gently.
His mother and father smiled at each other as Raiden looked up at his parents and smiled and laughed he was happy truly happy…
The End
Characters Raiden. Sora, Jahara, Jazar Copy-write Kaynight
Characters Aniu and Nava are Copy-write Universal
I wrote this about a year ago and then took it down but I'm putting it back up again. Also Dusty The True Story Part 4 is in the works but still is at least 4 weeks away. Thanks for your Patience.
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- Critiquing because I'm a rebel . . . LOL I liked it! It's very well written, but not perfect. I found it to be an enjoyable read . . . even if you wrote it a year ago (trust me, I have stories I've started a year ago . . . that aren't even finished yet!)! Raiden's character is interesting and yet it's sad that everyone's afraid of him. So much sadness and heartache, yet he's stuck in his sister's shadow . . . wah. Nice work - I can't wait to read the next part for Dusty: The True Story! - Juuchan17 |
a lot to show the world, but can't because they're in the
shadows of others.