blue.

‘You killed her…’ Raiden snarled loudly as he walked forward as all the wolves began to panic.

‘Listen to me Raiden we couldn’t just let the Orion Pack take over our lands, we were scared you’d kill us…’ Jahar said panicking and stepping backward away from Raiden who kept walking forward.

‘Not good enough.’ Raiden said in a low voice as he reared forward towards Jahara and the other wolves.

Meanwhile Aniu and her father Jazer were sitting on a ledge over looking their land which was now a land of cautious and destruction. Aniu suddenly felt a cold shiver as she looked down in to her land as Jazer who was worried looked up at her.

‘Aniu are you alright?’ He asked as she quickly nodded.

‘Father will you go and check the elders for me, I’ll wait here just incase the Orion Alpha decided that he will indeed come talk to me…’ Nodding Jazer quickly ran to find the elders as Aniu looked over her land.

From the shadows Raiden suddenly appeared and Aniu instantly turned around to see her brother. ‘You’re a little late…’ Aniu said with a smile but suddenly stopped, ‘…Raiden are you alright?’ She quickly walked up to him just as the cloud cover revealed the moon which shone on to Raidens coat. ‘No Raiden what have you done!?’ Aniu said shocked as he looked at her brother whose eyes had returned to normal and he just stood there looking down at the ground.

‘They had killed Sora…’ Raiden sighed as Aniu looked confused. Looking up from the ground Raiden looked deep in to his sisters eyes ‘I killed them...I…I don’t know but I know I killed them I couldn’t stop myself.’ Sitting down on the ground Aniu looked at her brother so many emotions running through her that she didn’t even know what she was feeling.

‘Jahar and the spirit pack, they’re all…’

‘No not all, but most…’

‘Oh Raiden…’ Aniu said turning away from her brother tears swelling in her eyes as Raiden walked up beside her.

‘Forgive me Aniu I couldn’t control myself all the anger inside.’ Raiden turned away from her and looked up towards the moon. ‘Every since I was a pup my fate was predetermined, they killed our mother, put me in solitude I lived alone for so long, they plotted against my back, they tricked me, they hurt you, they hurt our father and they killed Sora the only wolf who had ever loved me…we were going to be mates…my life has just been one let down after another and I couldn’t control it.’ Looking down from the moon towards his pack land which was not the lush land he had known when he was a pup but rather a land full of painful memories. ‘Why have you forsaken me! You said you be there for me mother…’ Raiden yelled to the plains and he sat down and hung his head low.

Aniu watched her brother tears still falling down her face as she walked up and sat down beside him nuzzling him to show that she still cared. ‘Remember when we were pups how we used to play in the small river?’

‘Please not now Aniu…’ Raiden started.

‘Listen please…’ Aniu said looking up at Raiden. ‘How I was caught in the swell and I was about to drown and you saved me, if you hadn’t been there I would have died. How can you possibly be evil my brother?’ Standing up Raiden turned away from his sister.

‘The elders were right, I brought the destruction of the Spirit Pack, I’m a murderer, you cant change destiny.’ Slowly Raiden began to walk away before breaking into a run leaving Aniu as he ran. He wasn’t sure where he was running, where he was going or what he was going to do all he knew was that he couldn’t stay.

 

‘Alpha Aniu of the Spirit Pack.’ Came a voice as Aniu turned around and saw the Alpha Male of the Orion Pack and two of his body guards. Bowing slightly Aniu watched as he walked forwards and stood beside her. ‘Our quarrel has only brought death and destruction, many have been killed including my daughter Sora in our last battle at the border…I ask for a truce that both our packs may live in peace in the future, I do not want any more of my pack killed?’ Looking shocked Aniu quickly nodded.

‘Every since this war started I longed for it to end and I will do anything to bring peace to my pack.’ Aniu said looking after where her brother went.

Nodding the Alpha Male slowly began to turn around and walk away but before he was gone he stopped and turned to face her. ‘Please accept my forgiveness for what I have done and ask for you to promise me that no one will come on our land again….’

‘You have my word…’ Aniu said bowing slightly as the wolves disappeared in to the darkness. Suddenly from the trees a tiny little pup walked forward and ran up to Aniu and was whimpering. Smiling down at the small pup Aniu knew him from her pack and was glad to see he had survived. ‘Oh Nava, this is the dawning of a new future for the Spirit Pack.’ She looked out towards the distance tears sliding down her face as she wondered whether she would ever see her brother again, ‘but I fear for my brother. Life has been bad to him and I want to give him all he deserved but I fear that I am to late…’ Nava looked up at Aniu and looked out towards the distance.


Raiden laid down on a ledge and looked up to the moon, he was too sad to cry, to angry to do anything, it was as though everything he was, was being blown away. Slowly he closed his eyes and smiled as the memory of him and Aniu playing together under the watchful eye of his loving parents came back to him.

‘Mum, dad lets make sure we never become distance from each other...’ Puppy Raiden said smiling as his mother nuzzled him his tail wagging behind him.

‘Yes mum lets be a family forever nothing will ever make us separate.’ Aniu said walking and sitting down beside her father.

'As long as I'm here nothing will ever hurt either of you.' Raiden's mother said gently.


His mother and father smiled at each other as Raiden looked up at his parents and smiled and laughed he was happy truly happy…

 

 

 

 

 

The End

 

 

 

 

 

 

Characters Raiden. Sora, Jahara, Jazar Copy-write Kaynight

Characters Aniu and Nava are Copy-write Universal

 

I wrote this about a year ago and then took it down but I'm putting it back up again. Also Dusty The True Story Part 4 is in the works but still is at least 4 weeks away. Thanks for your Patience.



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October 22, 2007
Female
Reminds me of a song I listen to. It's about people who have
a lot to show the world, but can't because they're in the
shadows of others.

October 20, 2007
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
- Critiquing because I'm a rebel . . . LOL

I
liked it! It's very well written, but not perfect. I found
it to be an enjoyable read . . . even if you wrote it a year
ago (trust me, I have stories I've started a year ago . . .
that aren't even finished yet!)! Raiden's character is
interesting and yet it's sad that everyone's afraid of him.
So much sadness and heartache, yet he's stuck in his
sister's shadow . . . wah. Nice work - I can't wait to read
the next part for Dusty: The True Story!

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Juuchan17

November 05, 2007
Cuba
Spirit/101 Dal Sources
*ish reading* omg awsome i love it!!




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