at his sister with a smile on his face. Aniu rolled her eyes as she stood back away from Raiden and looked at all the wolves who had gathered at the meeting.

‘Raiden will lead a first wave of attack, if it looks as though you are greatly outnumbered then retreat I will not let my pack be slaughtered.’ A loud chorus of whispers broke out throughout the entire pack as they all looked at each other. Slowly the strongest wolves stepped forward up to Raiden who smiled down at them which seemed to scare them as they quickly looked away.

‘Follow me and remember to work together we are fighting for our land!’ Raiden said loudly as he turned around and began to run in to the forest. For a moment no one seemed to follow but slowly the other wolves quickly followed after him. Once they were all gone Aniu frowned and looked at Jahar who had a large smirk on his face. Slowly Aniu turned around and walked away the guilty pit in her stomach getting worse and worse.


As soon as Raiden and the others were at the border of their land an onslaught of Orion wolves attacked them. As the fight proceeded Raiden showed how strong he was and saved many Spirit pack wolves but just as he was about to attack another wolf a different wolf jumped in front of him causing him to stop and look at them. The wolf had golden brown eyes and had white and grey fur that seemed to shine in the dying sunlight. Suddenly the wolf lunged at him causing him to blink and quickly jump out of the way. ‘Why hello…’ Raiden smirked as the two circled each other.

‘Hello there yourself blue eyes.’ The wolf sneered as she lunged at him again but missed.

‘I’m Raiden.’ He said holding his head up as he looked at the wolf in front of him who looked so beautiful, all his thoughts on attacking her seemed to drift away. Noticing his guard was down she leapt at him knocking his to the ground as she leapt beside him ready to bite down but she stopped as Raiden just looked dazed up at her.

‘Attack me then Raiden!’ She snarled, as Raiden smirked as he quickly stood up and whisked around knocking her to the ground.

‘Maybe if you were a match for me.’ He laughed as the wolf slowly got up and frowned

‘I’m more then a match…’ Before she could finish she heard a howl and she quickly looked back at Raiden before turning around and running away.

‘No wait!” Raiden yelled out after her as she disappeared in to the trees leaving Raiden to look out after her with a smug look on his face.

 

 

 

Part 5

‘Raiden….Raiden…’ Came the voice of a wolf as Raiden turned around to look at him.

‘Yes what is it?’ The wolf seemed to slink back at the sound of Raiden voice.

‘We should report back to Aniu for some reason they have retreated.’ Nodding to himself Raiden turned around from where the wolf he had met had ran off to before walking slowly back towards the elders as the night started to close in around them.

As Raiden walked all he could think about was the wolf he had met, she was so full of sprit and he couldn’t get the image of her out of his head, she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen and he didn’t even know her name. Everything that had happened during the battle seemed blurred to him, he couldn’t even remember what had happened because his head was in the clouds.

Once he and the others where back Aniu instantly ran up to Raiden and sighed in relief that he was alright. ‘What happened, was any one hurt?’ Aniu quickly asked but Raiden didn’t answer as he just smiled to himself.

Another wolf named Cuan quickly stepped forward ‘Alpha we lost two members but before the battle could continue any longer they retreated…we are not sure why.’

‘If they attacked us first why would they be the first to retreat from the first battle?’ Aniu asked herself as she dropped her head the haunting images of those who had died in her memory but she knew she didn’t have time to weep over them she had to wait till the battle was over, she couldn’t let her guard down. ‘Everyone rest tonight we will discuss more tomorrow…Cuan take two wolves and patrol the borders we must make sure the Orion pack don’t launch a surprise attack whilst we sleep.’ Nodding Cuan quickly took two wolves and began to walk back towards the border.

‘Wait!” Raiden called out running after them, ‘Let me come with you.’

Cuan and the others were too scared to refuse because they thought if they said no the destroyer would kill them, so they simply nodded and Raiden ran after them.

The night was cold and crisp and it wasn’t long before Raiden quickly split from the others as he walked in to the Orion’s pack lands easily avoiding the guards who were half asleep. He was looking for someone and it wasn’t long before he found them. The wolf he had seen that day was sitting on her own looking up at the moon, smiling up at her Raiden slowly walked forward causing to jump in surprise and turn around growling.

‘Please don’t call out I won’t hurt you…’ Raiden said quietly as the two looked at each other.

‘How dare you walk upon my land, I can kill you for this you trespasser.’

‘Kill me then.’ Raiden smirked walking forward and as he walked in to the moonlight she could see that he was the same wolf she had seen that afternoon.

‘Blue eyes…’ She muttered as she quickly stood up. ‘For the last time leave my land…’ She didn’t get to finish because Raiden quickly interrupted her.

‘My names Raiden not blue-eyes so now may I know the name of this beautiful wolf standing before me?’ he asked slyly looking at the wolf who was blushing under her coat.

‘My names Sora, the Alpha Heir of the Orion Pack.’ She said proudly holding her head up high.

‘I wouldn’t care if you were Sora Omega of the Orion pack.’ Raiden said smiling as he stepped closer, but Sora quickly stood back away from him.

‘No closer or I swear I’ll call my father and he’ll kill you.’ Sora spat angrily as Raiden heeded her words and sat down where he was. There was a silence between them as Raiden looked up at the moon and Sora watched him carefully. She knew she should call out to her pack so they could come and save her but for some strange reason she didn’t need to be saved it was clear that this wolf Raiden posed no threat. ‘Tell me the truth why do you walk upon my land?’ She asked as Raiden turned to look at her.

‘Don’t you believe me?’ Raiden asked looking at her as she looked away. ‘I came here to find you…’

‘You don’t even know me.’ Sora said frowning looking back at him.

‘And you don’t know me so then how can we be enemies if we don’t even know why we are fighting?’ Raiden said truthfully.

‘Don’t trick me into saying anything about my pack.’ She said quickly as Raiden stood back up and walked over and stood beside her but for some reason she didn’t move, she felt safe beside him.

‘I’m not here to trick you…’

‘Please leave.’ Sora said standing up and walking away from him as he looked after her.

Before she was out of sight Raiden quickly called out to her ‘Can I see you again?’ She stopped but didn’t turn around, ‘Met me tomorrow night at the border where the river flowing from the mountain enters the sea?’ He asked as she kept walking away Raiden looking after her.

Sighing Raiden turned back around towards his own pack lands and he ran as fast as he could till he crossed the border and entered his own pack lands. Cuan who was on patrol watched carefully as he saw Raiden run back on their lands, looking confused Cuan quickly turned back around to find Jahar and tell him what he had seen Raiden the destroyer doing.

 

 

 

Part 6

‘You what!’ Jahar cried out causing Caun to slink back away from him. ‘I knew he would bring our destruction but who could have thought he would work together with the Orion pack in doing so!’

‘We should tell Aniu…’ Caun said standing back up as Jahar quickly shook his head.

‘No she has too many troubles at the moment then to worry about her brother…’ Turning to Caun Jahar sighed before saying, ‘get some guards and watch him day and night we need to see if he really is a traitor before we tell Aniu.’

‘Sir I believe strongly we tell Aniu she is the Alpha now.’ Caun retorted not wanting to go behind his alpha’s back, the punishment if she found out would be horrible.

‘Listen to me Caun we need to protect the Alpha and this is only way we can do that.’ Jahar argued back as Caun sighed and nodded as he slinked away in the shadows. Once he was gone Jahar smiled to himself as he laid back down, everything Raiden did was falling in to his plan the destroyer would be gone within the week.


As the sun rose the next morning Raiden slowly opened his eyes to see Aniu standing in front of him with a stern look on her face. ‘You didn’t report back last night.’ She said looking down as Raiden slowly stood back up and stretched out his legs.

‘I thought Caun or one of the others would.’

‘No one did, so tell me now.’ Aniu said sternly. She wasn’t normally so strict but with her territory under threat she had over night become very serious, a true leader.

‘I didn’t see anything, all was quiet. I’m still not sure why they retreated so quickly I was sure they were winning?’ Raiden said looking confused up at Aniu who turned around.

‘Find Marrek for me and tell him to come see me as soon as possible.’ She said looking back at Raiden who quickly nodded before walking away but before he was gone he stopped and turned back to his sister.

‘You’re doing a good job Aniu…’ With that he quickly bounded away to find Marrek the wolf.

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October 22, 2007
Female
Reminds me of a song I listen to. It's about people who have
a lot to show the world, but can't because they're in the
shadows of others.

October 20, 2007
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
- Critiquing because I'm a rebel . . . LOL

I
liked it! It's very well written, but not perfect. I found
it to be an enjoyable read . . . even if you wrote it a year
ago (trust me, I have stories I've started a year ago . . .
that aren't even finished yet!)! Raiden's character is
interesting and yet it's sad that everyone's afraid of him.
So much sadness and heartache, yet he's stuck in his
sister's shadow . . . wah. Nice work - I can't wait to read
the next part for Dusty: The True Story!

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Juuchan17

November 05, 2007
Cuba
Spirit/101 Dal Sources
*ish reading* omg awsome i love it!!




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