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| October 20, 2007 | ||
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| WQ > Balto > WoC |
- Critiquing because I'm a rebel . . . LOL I liked it! It's very well written, but not perfect. I found it to be an enjoyable read . . . even if you wrote it a year ago (trust me, I have stories I've started a year ago . . . that aren't even finished yet!)! Raiden's character is interesting and yet it's sad that everyone's afraid of him. So much sadness and heartache, yet he's stuck in his sister's shadow . . . wah. Nice work - I can't wait to read the next part for Dusty: The True Story! - Juuchan17 |
a lot to show the world, but can't because they're in the
shadows of others.