Raiden - Brother Of Aniu

Author : Kaynight

Date sent : October 19, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Raiden is the complete opposite of his sister in personality and looks. His coat is completely black and his eyes an icy blue which match his changing personality. Although the Spirit Pack was foretold to be a pack that cared for each of its members this has suddenly changed when a pup born to the Alpha's scares the elders in to believing he will bring their destruction. The spirit has now completely changed and with the suspicious death of the Alpha Female and Raiden being excluded the future does not look bright for the tiny innocent pup.

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Characters : 2224 visits



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Raiden - Brother Of Aniu
By Kaynight

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October 22, 2007
Female
Reminds me of a song I listen to. It's about people who have
a lot to show the world, but can't because they're in the
shadows of others.

October 20, 2007
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
- Critiquing because I'm a rebel . . . LOL

I
liked it! It's very well written, but not perfect. I found
it to be an enjoyable read . . . even if you wrote it a year
ago (trust me, I have stories I've started a year ago . . .
that aren't even finished yet!)! Raiden's character is
interesting and yet it's sad that everyone's afraid of him.
So much sadness and heartache, yet he's stuck in his
sister's shadow . . . wah. Nice work - I can't wait to read
the next part for Dusty: The True Story!

-
Juuchan17

November 05, 2007
Cuba
Spirit/101 Dal Sources
*ish reading* omg awsome i love it!!




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