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| June 17, 2007 | ||
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Well, the twist at the end was certainly a surprise, although it comes out of nowhere, which sort of detaches it. Other than that, you did quite well. |
| June 17, 2007 | ||
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What can I say... This one needs more then one continue This story...Well not rock but I liked it I needs a continue |