Balto Family Stories: The Change of Heart: Part 1

Author : Grey Wolf 777

Date sent : October 02, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : This story is about Niju, who is given a second chance to fix what he has done wrong. He sets out to apologize to all of those he had hurt. On the way, he runs into Aleu. Niju starts to have feelings that he never had for Aleu. They become friends, then short after, they fall in love. This is only the first part. When I finish with the second, I will send it as soon as I can. Enjoy!

Length : Very long -

Characters : 10138 visits



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Balto Family Stories: The Change of Heart: Part 1
By Grey Wolf 777

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Guest
January 16, 2008
hey I just finished the story it is awsome and I cant wait
for the next one

December 27, 2007
Norway
The MTR addicts <3
wow! Thats awesome! MOOOOOOOOORRREEEEEE!!

December 24, 2007
Female
I finished! It rocks!! PLEASE continue!

November 03, 2007
Female
I haven't finished yet but i'm getting there. AWSOME SO
FAR!!!!

October 24, 2007
Usa Male
lilyarcticat --> Amen to that, sister.

October 12, 2007
Usa Male
I'll try to get some people to read it. I wasn't that
popular when I first started either.

October 13, 2007
I read only a part of this, but it is pretty good. I think
that you shouldn't write in a movie script style because
most people aren't used to reading a long story that doesn't
flow well (Script style is a bit choppy, and jars the eyes a
little). Other then that and a few mistakes in spelling,
you're doing great!

October 13, 2007
Usa Female
I look forward to more of your stories!

October 13, 2007
Usa Female
Wow! That was awesome Grey Wolf 777! I'm very impressed!
Thanks for letting me know Dragon Tamer!

October 08, 2007
Usa Male
You're welcome.

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