he could with Aleu before she left.

To Be Continued…

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Guest	January 16, 2008

hey I just finished the story it is awsome and I cant wait
for the next one


Norwegia nWolf	December 27, 2007

	The MTR addicts <3

wow! Thats awesome! MOOOOOOOOORRREEEEEE!!


WolfCall	December 24, 2007

I finished! It rocks!! PLEASE continue!


WolfCall	November 03, 2007

I haven't finished yet but i'm getting there. AWSOME SO
FAR!!!!


Jake Razor	October 24, 2007

lilyarcticat --> Amen to that, sister.


Jake Razor	October 12, 2007

I'll try to get some people to read it. I wasn't that
popular when I first started either.


Kelev	October 13, 2007

I read only a part of this, but it is pretty good. I think
that you shouldn't write in a movie script style because
most people aren't used to reading a long story that doesn't
flow well (Script style is a bit choppy, and jars the eyes a
little). Other then that and a few mistakes in spelling,
you're doing great!


Blue_bel le	October 13, 2007

I look forward to more of your stories!


Blue_bel le	October 13, 2007

Wow! That was awesome Grey Wolf 777! I'm very impressed!
Thanks for letting me know Dragon Tamer!


Jake Razor	October 08, 2007

You're welcome.

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