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Balto:

 Family Stories:

The Change of Heart.  

 

Chapter1

 

      It has been only a few weeks ever since Steven offered to take Aleu home with him. And the days were starting to get warmer. Aleu and her clan decided to pay Steven and her father another visit. They traveled by day and rested at night. It only took a couple of days to reach them and they were almost there.

 

Aleu: C’mon guys let’s keep up! Let’s try to do the rest of the traveling this afternoon so there is not a long way ahead in the morning.

  

            They were all pretty tired and hungry, including Aleu. 

           

Ferris: Aleu can we please stop for the night; it’s getting way too dark and we are all very tired. Am I right guys?!

 

They all said yes in very high and tiring voices.

 

Aleu: (Giving a small chuckle.) Alright guys, you win. C’mon there is a cave over there where we can stay for the night.

 

            Every one of them took a sigh of relief as they took their precious time to get over to the cave. Farris quickly walked up to Aleu.

 

Farris: Hey, sorry about that. It is just that for all of our safety I don’t think we should press on too hard. 

 

Aleu: Yeah… well thanks for being honest. I’m just so anxious to see my family; and Steven for that mater. I know you guys are tired and I really should be the one to apologize.

 

Farris: Thanks. No apology necessary, at least you let us stop. You have been very nice to us ever since you have been our leader. If Niju were leader, oh, he wouldn’t even let us stop to take a breath. So, thanks. 

 

Aleu: (With a slight giggle) you’re welcome Farris. I wonder what Niju is doing right now.

 

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             It has been about a year since Aleu joined her clan, and Nava was still looking for Niju where he had run away. Niju was just desperate to go into solitude so he wouldn’t have to deal with the embarrassment of seeing him again.

            The mountains of the clan’s old territory stretched long ways. Forestcovered a small fraction of it. Nava kept track of Niju’s scent and followed it, but not constantly. He stopped at a stream near by if he was ever thirsty. He killed what he needed to for food. And he rested when he could. He was in no rush to find him.

            One day, when he was searching near the shore again, Nava lifted his nose in the air and managed to find a stronger scent.

 

Nava: (sniffing) Niju.

 

            Nava faced the other direction and sniffed. Niju was hiding behind a large rock in the direction that Nava was first looking in, peeking at him, and hoping that he would just give up. He didn’t want to hurt Nava, he just wanted to be left alone.

            As he saw Nava sniffing in the other direction, he ran away towards the opposite direction that Nava was in. Running quickly but quietly, he spotted a little opening that happened to be a cave entrance. He quickly ran up to it and squeezed himself inside.

            Panting heavily Niju peered out the opening to see if Nava was coming, and he was but then turned away in the opposite direction. Niju was relieved as he watched him run.

            Niju turned away with his eyes closed with a guilty sad look on his face. He slowly walked to the nearest corner of the cave and plopped down on the cave floor. His eyes looked weak, like he hadn’t slept in days.

 

Niju: (In a tiring voice) what am I going to do now? How am I going to live like this…

What have I done… 

                     

            Niju gave a long and heavy sigh along with his tiring eyes and closed them. He wanted to go to sleep more than anything in the world… Then, in the corner of his eye he spotted a light, a bright one at that. Niju looked up with confusion and stood up and slowly walked toward to where the light was coming from. He had to squeeze through a little hallway and down a narrow hole.

            Niju found the light. He was amazed. His eyes widened, his mouth slightly dropped and his ears came down as he stared at it in astonishment. He had no clue where the light had come from. He had never seen anything like it in his whole life… and yet, he felt a feeling of warmth and joyfulness inside of him. He felt safe and happy, this feeling put a smile on his face. Then all of a sudden, it got brighter as it spoke to him.

 

Spirit: (In a calm and soothing voice) Niju. 

 

Niju: What! Who’s there?! Who are you?! Where are you?!

 

            Niju turned around quickly to see if whatever was speaking to him was behind him. He looked all over in panic. He could hear the voice clearly. He knew it must have been a female. The voice was calm and soft.

 

Voice: Niju.

 

Niju: Show yourself! Where are you?!

 

Voice: You are afraid, Niju. Don’t be.

 

Niju: I am not afraid!  

 

            Niju started in confusion. Then he started to see something come out of the Light. He saw on the ground white paws, walking toward him, and as they walked toward him, the light got closer as well. Niju started to back up, but he didn’t let his guard down. He started to growl and snarl as the figure walked toward him.

            Then he saw a figure, in the shape of a wolf. Niju lowered his guard down a little, and began to look a little closer. The image began to clear. And within seconds, he saw who it was.

            It was Aniu, standing in her snow white appearance. Niju looked in shock.

 

Niju: Aniu!

 

            Niju sounded like his breath had been taken away. He couldn’t believe it. Niju lowered his guard one hundred percent.

 

Voice: I may not be the one you’re afraid of, but of a natural part of life

 

Niju: A natural part of life?

 

Voice: You know of what you fear.  

 

Niju: Then what do I fear. What am I so afraid of?

 

Aniu: You try to deny that everything in life will change.

 

            Niju put his head down in embarrassment. He knew his fear as much as he didn’t want to admit it.

 

Aniu: Yes, you know that it is true. 

 

Niju: How do you know this about me?

 

Aniu: I have been watching over you, Niju. 

 

            Niju thought about it, he had no idea how she could have known about his fear.   Well he did have one Idea.

            During the years, Nava taught the clan of many different faiths, including Buddhism, Judaism, and Christianity, although Nava believed in The Father Sun and Mother Earth. He taught the clan the rules and gods of each faith. But one faith always concerned Niju, Christianity.

            He noticed that the figure worshiped in this faith was one that had the simple name of God, but in a trinity: God the father, God the son, and God the Holy Spirit. He also learned about Satan, Demons and Angels.

            He didn’t believe in any of the faiths that Nava had taught him, until now. Niju thought she must have been an Angel. And as far as he knew, angels watch over, whether if it’s a human or animal.

 

Aniu: I have taken my place in the kingdom of Heaven.  

 

            Niju couldn’t believe his ears. Nothing else in his mind was concentrated on the spirit that spoke before him.

 

Niju: How could this be…you…you are?

 

Aniu: Yes.

 



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January 16, 2008
hey I just finished the story it is awsome and I cant wait
for the next one

December 27, 2007
Norway
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wow! Thats awesome! MOOOOOOOOORRREEEEEE!!

December 24, 2007
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I finished! It rocks!! PLEASE continue!

November 03, 2007
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I haven't finished yet but i'm getting there. AWSOME SO
FAR!!!!

October 24, 2007
Usa Male
lilyarcticat --> Amen to that, sister.

October 12, 2007
Usa Male
I'll try to get some people to read it. I wasn't that
popular when I first started either.

October 13, 2007
I read only a part of this, but it is pretty good. I think
that you shouldn't write in a movie script style because
most people aren't used to reading a long story that doesn't
flow well (Script style is a bit choppy, and jars the eyes a
little). Other then that and a few mistakes in spelling,
you're doing great!

October 13, 2007
Usa Female
I look forward to more of your stories!

October 13, 2007
Usa Female
Wow! That was awesome Grey Wolf 777! I'm very impressed!
Thanks for letting me know Dragon Tamer!

October 08, 2007
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You're welcome.

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