Great one.

How did I know they were going to fall in love. Makes since though,
better for Luna with Toby than Pete.

Whoa! Awesome job, Dragon Tamer! *thunderous applause* This
story reminded me somewhat of my story 'The Right Time'. I
wonder why... How do you do it? You make a story funny,
yet deep all at the same time. Great job! I can't wait to
see what happens between Luna and Toby...

Well, redwolf, admittedly I DID get some ideas from "The
Right Time," but it was largely based on another story of
mine (you know the one ). It seemed natural for things to
spark between the two of them sooner or later, and it seemed
like, well, the right time.

awsome awsome oh and thanks for the coment on wolf trait

all right. i'm ready for the next one. i'll be waiting.
it was good by the way. you write good and you actually
take time to put in detail. detail is good
i'll be
ready for the next one.

Very good! I laughed out loud on some of the parts, because
I knew where it would head, yet Toby's little quips were
funny. "But getting a guy on the nose? Now that's just low."
LOL Hope to see the next part soon!

Darth Hast--> Thanks. I appreciate feedback on what I'm
doing well and what I need to work on.

Kelev-->
Well if everything goes as planned, the next one should be
even funnier, so I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

WOW I REALY LIKE THE BUILD UP TO THE END ON THIS ONE,IT
SHOWS THE TRUE HORROR AND HAPPINESS OF FALLING IN LOVE AND
HOW AWKWARD IT CAN BE TO CONFRONT IT...YOU SHOULD GET THEESE
PUBLISHED AS THEY HAVE REAL LIFE ISSUES IN THEM.WELL DONE I
LOVE IT! woops sory this is in capitals

Well I've been browsin' your stories and read this one and
truth be told, even though it was very cute, the story-line
- in my opinion - was very bland. I mean, it was very easy
to predict from the moment I read this story about what
would happen. Didn't get me on the edge of my seat or any in
that sort of way that I like to enjoy when I'm readin' a
fanfic. Sorry but this is how I feel 'bout this fanfic.

For me it's just simply rather the BEST ONE you have
written!^^ !! oh dear Now the most horrible part
waiting for the next one. Such a wonderful JOB Dragon
Tamer!!!! I loved this one!! Write on!

DakotaWereWolf-->Well, having read some of your stories, I
know that I'd have to really be at the top of my game to
compete with you in the plot twists department, and let's
face it, romance is one of those mined-out fields of writing
with very few surprises left. Perhaps the other stories I
have written are more your sort of story. Truth be told,
I'm more interested in a career in novels than thrillers.
Thanks for commenting anyway.

KrazyArc-->
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll try not to leave you hanging too long on the next one, although it's not quite finished.

I really liked your story. Do you think it would be okay if
I used Luna in one of my fan fics? You can just send me a
private message telling me yes or no but the main thing is,
is that it is going to be awfully hard waiting for the next
one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a wonderful story

Awwwe so cute! Glad it worked out between them! I'd read the
other fan-fics if I had time. (homework!) Keep it up!

(comment to all Toby series)

Very well written,
You created some real clear and likeable characters. So
overall I could forgive You so hostile approach to
Steele

how many books r in the serise? i wanna read more ! since
this one is is my fav i red it again and again!

I'm glad to know you like it. I had a hunch Part 4 would be
especially popular on this site. To answer your question, I
have ideas for a total of eight Toby stories, including the
ones already posted. However, there is certainly a
possibility of that number growing if I can come up with
enough ideas.

GREAT JOB! ITS MY FAVORITE OF THE SERIES! NOW WRITE MORE
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was a good story to though

Nice title

YOURE WELCOME!!!!! 8D

Her parents spied! That is not nice! But seeing the
situtation... it was funny!! I LOVE the series! Keep
writing!

FUNNY!! What did you do, stick them in a date and see how
much could go wrong? Whatever you did, you did an awesome
job of it. Another great work!

Thanks, Strawberry! BTW, Luna has answered your question on the forum.

I had a similar case happen to me. It wasn't enjoyable!
Good job!

Thank you. And regarding Part Three, you can always PM me whatever you
were thinking of.

very sweet.....can't wait to finish the one after this