One day,was a little pup found out in the forest by a little girl named Maggie.oh who are you, said Maggie and lifted the little pup up. The puppy looked at her. She was a bit tired because she just went asleep right before Maggie found her. Come on girl,said Maggie. I take you home.

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When Maggie and the pup came home,asked Maggie her mother: Mom?
Yes honey,said Maggies mom. Look what i found in the forest! Maggies mom turned around and saw the pup. Maggie!,said her mom. What are you doing!!! I don't know,said Maggie. But i have a feeling that i'm in trouble. No no no said Maggies mom and laughed. I think the little dog is a cute little dog,she said again. And do you know wath said her mom to Maggie. I and you father have talked a bit about that to get a pup,and she IS reaaly cute and she have no home and...Maggies mom don't came any longer. OH THANK YOU MOM!!! cryed Maggie. Thank you,thank you,thank you!!!! Hmmm...said Mag(maggie) and looked at the pup,who was playing at the floor with a shoe. I gonna call you...Snow! Snow Shakira!! Snow barked. She knew this was a good thing. A really good thing.

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Snoooow,cryed Mag. Oh there you are girl,said Mag when she found her. She was chewing at the same shoe she played with at her first day with Maggie. Snow barked. Snow,said Mag again. Should we go out for playing a game? Waff Woff barked Snow high. Okey said Mag and laughed. Lets go girl! They would like to play at the beach and then they have to go in to the town. Waff! said a dog. Snow screamed a bit. Oh sorry,said the dog. I don't mean to scream you. By the way,my name is Sandy. said Sandy. Oh hi Sandy said Snow. My name is snow. Snow Shakira. Wow,said Sandy. That name was awesome!! Oh thanks,said Snow. Snow!!! said Mag. Come on! We gotta go! Well,my human call. Goodbye Sandy said Snow. Goodbye said Sandy.

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One day,Snow don't couldnt find Mag. She serached,but give up and went back to the house. "Huh?" said Snow when she saw that  it was a doctor in theys house. She became worried. Careful she take a  step
in to Mag's room. "Woff" said Snow careful. "No Snow" said Mag's mum. "Maggie can not play now,just leave us alone"said Mags mum. Snow sigthed. What was wrong now? She was tired. She feld asleep.
"NOOO!"someone cryed. Snows eyes was open up. "Who,what,where"said Snow. She heard someone was crying. So she saw the doctor where leaving. "Ill be back in two seconds" said the doctor. Snow barked. "Oh hello Snow" said Mags mum. She sighted. "Snow honey.  It have been very hard for us now. And for Maggie. She became seriously sick,and well she dosen't became abel to survive. Snow,Mag is die." That was Mags mum said. Snow started to howl a long howl full of sorrow.

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One day said mags mum:"We can not afford food to you anymore"  She took of her collar. "Goodbye Snow" said Mags mum. Snow started to cry. She have loose everyting.

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From now, Snow started to live under some stairs. One day she meet Sandy again. "Hey Sandy!" said Snow happy. "Hello Snow" barked frendly. "Do hang on to the beach?" said Sandy "Of course" said Snow and smiled. She loved the beach. There she felt so home! And the o' so great Balto lived there! She started to run. With closed eyes. very very fast. Run run run and crash! "Auch" said a female. Snow open up her eyes again. It was Dusty.   "Oh Dust,im so sorry for it are you okey?" appologized Snow. "No" said Dusty quietly. And so came Kodi.  "Dusty,whats happening?" asked Kodi scared.  "She runned at me!" said Dusty  and pointed at Snow with a paw. "what!" said Kodi mad. "Do you know what you just doed?!" said  Kodi angry. "Hey calm  down! I only crashed,no more!" said Snow and started to get mad to. "only crashed!?" said  Kodi. "Dusty is pregnant,the pups can die!!"  snow swallowed.  So said Kodi:"If something have happend to the pups it is your faulth!!!" "and Kodi gonna take you if it is" said Dusty.

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Now Snow only was with Sandy. She was afraid for Kodi.
Another place sat a shiba and looked at Snow."sight" he sighted. "You are beautiful"said the dog again and continued his daydreaming.

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Some months later Snow walked a little outside the town. "And there you are!"said a voice. Snow turned around. It was Kodi. "You have a BIG problem! One of my and my pretty Dusty's puppy died!!!" he said quietly. "And that is your faulth!!!! i never used to attack a girl but you have KILLED another! A pup who not get a bit of her life!!!!" said Kodi hardly. "But but" said Snow. "GRRRRRRRRRRR" said Kodi. "Well here it comes..."thinked Snow and closed her eyes hard. And then he cames flying! A orange dog! Snow screamed. "What are you doing. It are Snow you trying to kill!! The prettiest,most beautiful..."the dog dosen't came anylonger. Kodi hang and bitted the dog in the neck and throwed him away. But then Snow flyed on Kodi. "Auuuuuuch!!!!!!!!!"cryed Kodi. He was hurted badly. He ran away. "Oh dear!" said Snow and ran to the brave dog. "Are you all righ?" asked Snow. "auch..." said the dog quietly. He raised up. "Are you?" asked the dog. "oh yes" said Snow and smiled. "My name is Snow" said Snow. "My name is Shipa,im a shiba!" he said. And then Snow saw Shipa in hes eyes for first time. They was so beautiful! "You,you saved me!" said Snow. "Well you are most important thing for me" said Shipa. "Are i?" said Snow surprised. "Yes,you are" said Shipa. Finaly the luck comes back to Snow again...
THE END!!!!


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December 03, 2007
That's exciting!!!

October 06, 2007
Usa Male
Nice story, although it's a little hard to follow.

January 11, 2009
Canada Female
Snap crackle pop
Wow thats an old pic i drew lol
i can redraw it if ya want




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