Author : Jake Razor
Date sent : May 17, 2007
Rating :
G (Everyone)Category : Relationship/Love
Description : Toby and Luna are getting ready for their first date. But Pete wants to ruin their night out, and he's using every trick in the book to do it.
Length : Average -




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Razor
it.
You got a little insperionson(?) from lion king 1
too.
Can't the continue come now I want
too now what happen next.
notic that witch the lion king 1½ (maybe it's becouse I not
have seen it ) Can't wait for a continue! this stories
are just so d*** good
3
little of The Lion King 1 and 1/2, where Timon and Pumbaa
keep trying to mess up Simba and Nala's "date" but their
tricks keep backfiring on them. I also noticed the little
"Lady and the Tramp" touch,too. Great story! How long is
the Toby series going to be?...Not that I want it to end!
too, which is a huge bonus in the romantic sort of fanfics.
Keep it up!
Razor
from TLK 1 1/2, and the Lady and the Tramp reference was
deliberate as well (I have done so many parodies of that
movie, it's not even funny). As for how long the Toby series
will be, I have plans as far as number eight right now. But
I may come up with more, and I'm open to suggestions if
anyone has 'em.
Kelev --> Yeah. It's too bad more romances aren't clean these days, but if you ask me it just makes the ones that are all the better. Anyone can be crude, but it takes real discipline to be funny, romantic, AND clean. Fortunately, as long as there are peple like usround who appreciate clean entertainment, there's hope yet for the internet.
Razor
1/2 reference, read redwolf 03's comment. It pretty much
sums up where I got the whole idea. Of course if you haven't
seen the movie, you might want to avoid reading the comment
so you don't ruin the surprise for yourself.
Razor
075-cwp
Razor
Razor
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lines, but still was very good, in my view. If you ever
decide to take being an author as your carrrier, I think you
would make a very good one. And thats something I usually don't admit to people, so thats something coming from me.
writing!!
Razor
think I picked that line up from an episode of Smallville.
I note a thing that I haven't seen before. I don't know if
anyone have said this but I found a line from Johnny
English.
"If I told I'm afraid I have to kill you"
Great story
Razor
have their similarities. In fact, I first got the idea for
"Date With Disaster" from a scene in "The Lion King 1 1/2."
The ice cave, though, was more based on the crystal caverns
mentioned in one of the Dinotopia books. But it is similar
to the Northern Lights too. Thank you for your interest. And
BTW, I noticed your spoiler warning. If you ever have a
question and don't want to give away part of a story, you
can always PM me or ask it in my forum topic, "Toby series:
Chat With The Cast."
Alue the
Wolf
can't wait to see the next!
Razor
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