Toby Part Five: Date with Disaster

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : May 17, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Toby and Luna are getting ready for their first date. But Pete wants to ruin their night out, and he's using every trick in the book to do it.

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Toby Part Five: Date with Disaster
By Jake Razor

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November 12, 2010
Usa Male
Taco --> True. That's one of the nice things about anthropomorphism. It lets you remind people how THEY ought to behave, and that they aren't just animals.

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Guest
October 28, 2010
Wow, I never knew dogs dated like this. My dogs usually skip to the end of dating and marriage. :o

June 21, 2010
Usa Male
Quazie --> Thank you very much. I tried to make Toby and Luna's relationship a demo of how relationships should be carried out. Too many writers out there, and too many real people, have gotten it into their heads that dating is some non-optional, fast-paced thing that's all about hormones. Nothing could be farther from the truth, and I tried to illustrate that with Toby and Luna. Glad to know I succeeded.

And yes, I've done my share of playing Dad. A lot of people on this site come along with their share of problems, often dealing with relationships, and I make it my business to help where I can. Some people here actually call me "Daddy."

Guest
Guest
May 28, 2010
I enjoyed this one as well as your other stories! I've read all of redwolf03's fics and I have to say that you've captured Toby's character quite well. I enjoy the relationship between him and Luna, and I think they make a good couple. I also believe that you are pretty good at handling the relationship scenes pretty well. When I was reading the scene with Toby and his dad I got the feeling that you seem to know what goes on in parents' heads. Great job and keep the good work!

March 18, 2010
Usa Male
Thanks again.

March 18, 2010
This was great!

November 03, 2009
Usa Male
Croc --> Thank you. :) I'm glad to see it too. When someone says someting like that, it really makes my day. It gives a tangible reminder that there is still hope for our society.

October 25, 2009
Usa
It's nice to see that people still care about clean romance these days.

Great story BTW, Keep up the good, clean work.

God bless,
Crocluva95

September 01, 2009
Usa Male
St4rr --> I know. That part I wrote to be fun, not necessarily unique.

August 27, 2009
Usa
Spaghetti and meatballs? That's not very original

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