A very nice story. I especially liked your little play on the pup's
name. Loki was the name of the Norse god of mischief wasn't it? The pup sure caused plenty of that.

Drifter --> Right on the money.

not your best. I didn't like it too much. It was definetly
not your best but keep it up

It seemed very good to me, but when I read the title it
didn't seem to fit the story, Otherwise I think It was very
well written ^^

Well, it WAS a little compacted, I'll admit. But I thoguht I did pretty well, since the main goal was to maka sttatement about things like tolerance. The next one should be a lot more complex, plot-wise.

Very good, the pup in question was funny!

I can see that you used Bible characters. Good idea.

hahaha I realy call that a pup problem When
does a continue come?

sandstorm --> Thanks for reading. I toyed wth calling it
"Cub Chaos," but I decided "Pup Problems" sounded better.
Break --> Fairly soon. You'll never guess what it's about

I_Love_Aleu --> Yeah, I did. Glad you noticed I
had to be obscure about it, though, or it would run the risk
of deletion.
Kelev --> Thanks!

WOW!! Great story!! When will the next part come? by the
way, the story said that when the pup didn't answer, Toby
didn't know what it really meant. What did you mean?

wolfcall --> If you mean the case on page 2, it was supposed
to foreshadow how much trouble the pup was going to be.
Kaltag is the smartest --> Don't worry. I will. And the
next one is a DOOZY.

YAY!!!! u made another one! keep 'em comin'!!

Ah! This one had Problems I didn't like it at all, one it
was good story line, two they way you wrote it was cool and
enjoyalbe, three why I hate it? I don't see part seven up.
>( !

KrazyArc --> Well, I'm glad to know it's good (at least I think that's what you said). Don't worry,
part 7 is already underway.

oh, thanks for telling me. GREAT story!

As always, that was really good and really funny, Dragon
Tamer! I was starting to miss your stories. In the next Toby
part (number 7; yikes!) are Toby and Luna going to have
puppies? That would be kind of cute...and undoubtedly very
entertaining...

Thanks! I'll have the next one up before too long, but any
further installments may take a while.

Wow- I have followed your sereies for quite some time~ if I
read it right will Toby and Luna have...well more ** on
their hands?? Any ways, great stuff can't wait for part 7^^

That's a good story in all regards. Ever watch McGee and
Me? There was one episode with something like the race in
it. And as for the other stuff, just think about it. With
the deer? Bambi.