Indeed.

Poor Toby and the team! I hope Toby catches that guy.
*growls*

Awesome! You really put a lot of thought into the Northern
Lights pack's way of life...By the way, I don't like stories
that say 'to be continued'. That means I'll have to wait for
the ending! and I DON'T LIKE THAT! Please hurry with the
next fic. Your Toby series is great!

YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!! ARE YOU SERIOUS!!
AAAAAAHHH! Well, AWSOME book! I CAN'T wait for the next
part!

I thought that was what people would say. Well, you'll just
have to see what happens, folks. ha ha ha

SummerBreeze --> Frankly, I'll be pretty darn happy if he
and the team manage to pull through at all!
redwolf03
--> Sorry I forgot to say so earlier, but thanks for
reading. I'm glad my handling of the Northern Lights pack
met with your approval. I'm hoping to get a little more
feedback on part 1 before I post part 2, but it shouldn't be
too long.

You'r smart.
I've just read Part Eight, and Charokee
Wisdom and I see how you are using the phrophosy of the old
man to ask the question: Wich wolf is Toby feeding?

Well what the old man said wasn't a prophesy. It was an
allegory, meaning it used figurative language to parallell
an actual truth like when C.S. Lewis used Aslan to parallell
Jesus. In Toby's case, he is feeding them both in
surprisingly similar ways. His concern for Luna's safety is
a good thing, as is his desire to protect both her honor and
his own in the eyes of the public. However, his hatred of
the man they are after is feeding the bad wolf, and it
undermines his efforts to an extent that may wreck
everything good he has worked for.

Wow. O.o A good story. I hope you put the ending soon!!!!!

Thanks, guys. I'll post the next part very soon!

I can't wait for the next part.

Oooh very nice, leaving it on a bit of a cliff hanger too

Hope the next installment will be up soon

It will be. I'm also thinking of setting up a forum topic,
kinda like a Roleplay, where people can "chat" with the
characters in my stories. Sound interesting?

Bravo! A very good example of an epic.

Dragon Tamer--> The "Ranger" reference was the typo I was
refering to.
Story Comment--> Whoa. Didn't see that
coming. What are you trying to pull, Dragon Tamer?

Heh heh. You'll see.

"Me? But I've had no training! I've never sniffed down a
criminal!"

"You sniffed down Steele once, it's
the same thing."

LOL I loved that line! I'm
halfway through, so bear with me. Good juob so far!