Toby Part Seven: Broken Memories

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : July 06, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : When a blow to Luna's head wipes out here memory, Toby tries to help her get back in touch with who she is (not to mention who THEY are). But Pete smells an opportunity to break up the canine couple for good, and he's not about to let it slip through his paws. DOESN'T MAKE AS MUCH SENSE IF YOU HAVEN'T READ TOBY PARTS ONE THROUGH SIX.

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Toby Part Seven: Broken Memories
By Jake Razor

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July 11, 2013
Usa Male
In all fairness, he did have a rough life. But yeah, he is a jerk.

Glad you like the stories; I look forward to more comments from you.

July 10, 2013
Usa
Pete is evil! He is a disgrace to dogs everywhere! Toby and Luna are pawsome!!

November 05, 2010
Usa Male
Taco --> Thanks. Hopefully the next one's as tasty; it's a two-course meal.

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October 28, 2010
Ah the classic amnesia scenario. Always a good one.
Very well written. My complements to the chef. (That means author)

September 01, 2009
Usa Male
St4rr --> I try to avoid use of guns in my fanfics, at least by the main characters. I acknowledge it can be necessary at times, but as a rule i don't promote it.
And I'm glad you found the story interesting.

August 05, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Pete, dying like that? That would be too easy.

July 29, 2009
Usa Male
Well so much for Pete, unless he survived getting shot in the head, he probably would because there was nothing to shoot.

July 03, 2009
Usa Male
Aleu --> Taking it to the extreme, are we?

August 29, 2009
Usa
One of your more interesting fanfics. Yea it would be too easy if pete got shot in the head but I've read a few fanfics where if the main character had a gun innocent lives would have been saved

July 02, 2009
Usa
Lone Wolf- stay away
*Makes angry noises* I'm gonna slug 'im. I'm gonna SLUG Pete myself.*Pulls out rifle and shoots Pete in the head*Much better.

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