Toby Part Nine: Wilderness Hunt Part 2

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : July 30, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : Toby's carelessness has landed him and his team in a really bad spot. Will help arrive in time, or is it the end for the police pack? DO NOT READ UNTIL YOU'VE READ THE PREVIOUS FANFIC!

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Toby Part Nine: Wilderness Hunt Part 2
By Jake Razor

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July 31, 2007
Female
Aaaw! How cute! WHAT IS THE ANSWER?! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
I loved it!

July 31, 2007
Usa Male
"What was the answer?" Do you even have to ask? As for
the next story, that's probably going to take a while. I'll
probably put up some other stories in the meantime.

July 31, 2007
Usa Male
Well like I said, I'm afraid the next one may be a long time
coming. Hopefully you'll enjoy my other stuff until then.

August 02, 2007
Uk Male
Haha great ending to a great story, I really like this Toby
character and Luna, anxiously waiting to read more

August 01, 2007
Sweden Male
read both parts and I'm saying "DOH it ended" can't wait for
a continue

August 03, 2007
Usa Male
Well to be honest, squival, I'm thinking about giving Toby
and Luna a little "vacation" while I write some other
stories.

August 03, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks, Balto Friend. It helps that I've always been a fan
of Disney movies, so I learned a lot of strategies for that
kind of thing early on.

August 03, 2007
Usa Male
YOU know how to end a story. You do that stuff a lot
cleaner than other users, to. Kudos!

August 04, 2007
Usa Female
Aww! Such a sweet ending! Great story, Dragon Tamer. And I'm
really glad it wasn't another 'to be continued'. Kudos!

August 05, 2007
Usa Male
Thanks. I've been thinking of taking a break from Toby, but
several things are coming together so I may do one more
before putting it on hold.

Guest
Guest
August 05, 2007
That's one of the best endings I've ever heard. Ooh
cliffhangers... Definatly the best series I've ever read.

August 06, 2007
Usa Male
wolfcall: Thanks! I'm getting close to finishing one or two
of my other ideas, so it shouldn't be too long!
Walto
Disney: Thanks. I'm kinda surprised to hear the ending of
Wilderness Hunt Part 2 described as a cliffhanger. Part 1
seemd more like one to me, but I'm not gonna (censored) the hand
that feeds me. Hope you like what I roll out next!

August 08, 2007
Female
I enjoyed it. I hope more are to come.

August 06, 2007
Usa Male
Any more comments?

August 08, 2007
Usa Male
Hopefully there will be soon.

October 20, 2007
Poland Male
Nice! Especially WH1&2. more comments in PM.

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